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muny should people employees thut Com punies Importunce to their whereey other suys. that they should give importance both and opinion. Customer

muny should people employees thut Com punies Importunce to their whereey other suys. that they should give importance both and opinion. Customer OyOwG
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In
generally
.
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from
a
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companies
viewpoint both is
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important
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because
tare
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use
interconnected to each ti
Likewise
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employees
.
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work
to
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Business
and attract
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Customers
,
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other
hand Consumer, by from
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Business
and revenue
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Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
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tell
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und
that.
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talk
that
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employees
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
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other
is
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important
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
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says
that
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Customers


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firstly
talk about why
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employees
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use
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important
However
.
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client
data does not
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Come
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
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employees
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
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first
.
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if
you take care of
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employees
, they
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use
your
Use "(Business)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
Business
than if client.
In addition
, whole en workers
Possible spelling mistake found.
hund
a happy and
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positive
environment,
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but
representative attract consumers them.
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to
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buy
if the
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mude
more
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Thes
with the times, and convenience e
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product
.
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for
example,
Possible spelling mistake. 'Labours' is British English.
Labours
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class
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Product
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but
they trained and give of their them Work
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because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
money t
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'they'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
they happiness
€
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comes
them Connect better @ Shopper.

The
secondly
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Customer
mung
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other
suss buck bone Industries,
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purchase
for
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Business
and revenues that of from them by
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Putron
,
In addition
,
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customer
service
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celso
Provide
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because
they
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astfauct
Shopper,
for example
, more
easily
more
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other
for increase
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business
scale,
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first
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customer
requirement fulfil
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und
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thun
sell
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Product
.
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they
income put Industries
In addition
Purchaser
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think
about cast and quality of
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products
, For increase
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business
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Customer
main advertisement.

In my point of view,
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customers
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use
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but
then
Possible spelling mistake found.
djent
ex shopper with.
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if
the
Possible spelling mistake found.
sello
is required
and
also
deal operator
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response
Possible typo. Did you mean "A" or "them"?
A them
more sell Product.

In conclusion
, • Custer client
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first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
.
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first
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employeer
, not
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muke
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und
talk with
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Putron
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
these.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
that
's why operators are
Use "(vital)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
vital
than
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Customer
me number.
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IELTS essay muny should people employees thut Com punies Importunce to their whereey other suys. that they should give importance both and opinion. Customer

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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