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Internet technology has brought many positive changes. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Internet innovation has impacted the world in a productive way. I strongly agree with this statement as this web technology has made our life much easier than the past. The pattern of education and work and many other things in our lives have changed and became really convenient. Internet has made it very easy to get education. Now we can study anywhere on the web with the help of internet. For example, now many international short courses and degree programs are being offered online at a reasonable cost, moreover, scholarships are also being given to the needy ones. Hence one can fulfill the dreams of studying abroad by just being at home. Due to this technology, the tasks can be performed quickly compared to the past. Now emails, web banking social networking shopping online have become tremendously fast. For instance, in previous times, people used to write letters with their hands and of course everyone did not possess strong writing abilities so it took a lot of time to them in writing with hand. However, all things can easily be typed in seconds. Moreover, we had no option in the old times except going to the shopping centers and making the purchase in person. However, now shopping can be done in seconds on the web on a click and the item is delivered at your place. These fruitful changes have made the world very quick and speedy. To conclude, I feel innovation has made human’s life much easier and things will be more effective in the near future due to innovation.

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To conclude
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