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Has technology made a positive contribution to sport today?

Has technology made a positive contribution to sport today? m9J5d
Most of people think that technology has helped to improved sport. Now lets go and examine the positive and negetive effects of technology on sports. Firstly the positive side a significant part of the technoloy is wireless and part able couchs can see all information such as heart beat, blood perssure of all plyers. Secondly thanks to technology players no longer suffer serious injuries in hight￾impact sports sincetists make hemlet for motor cycling players, rugby players, . . . . . Finaly goal line technology is used in football and volleyball to see if the ball has crossed the goal line this technology enhanses game play as the refree can make a correct and confident decision very quickly with out stopping the game. On the other hand new technologys are very expenssive for example new balls and new boots. To sum up i think technology it paves the way for greater quility in sport and technology always good for improve ever thing.
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IELTS essay Has technology made a positive contribution to sport today?

Essay
  American English
12 paragraphs
162 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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