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moving to another country

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Out of these 3 situations, I find the most difficult to deal with is moving to another country Because, a new boss will help me learn more things and make more friends when changing schools. Moving to another country faces difficulties such as language barriers, culture shock, financial worries, etc. I think before moving to another country I need: Learn the language of that country, prepare a good mentality and have a clear financial plan.
Out of these 3 situations, I find the most difficult to deal with is moving to another country

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, a new boss will
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help
me learn more things and
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make
more friends when changing schools.

Moving to another country faces difficulties such as language barriers, culture shock, financial worries, etc.

I
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think
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before
moving to another country I need: Learn the language of that country, prepare a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
mentality and have a
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clear
financial plan.

IELTS essay moving to another country

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
75 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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