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I. You are setting up a new brand of shampoo from natural ingredients. How are you going to advertise it?

I. You are setting up a new brand of shampoo from natural ingredients. How are you going to advertise it? 8GgOx
Recently, natural products have always been interested by users, and natural shampoos are no exception. To build a brand of natural shampoos, I used the following forms of advertising: Advertising via social networks such as: Facebook, Zalo, Instargram, . . . Via this form, not only many people know about my brand, but I can also sell products and take care of customers. Advertising on television, this form costs the most, but advertising on television as an affirmation of the quality of the product. Via interviews with famous hairstylists, their fans will know my brand Via Youtube with videos sharing how to style, take care of hair, through here many people will know the brand and can reach many customers.
Recently, natural products have always been
interested by
users, and natural shampoos are no exception. To build a brand of natural shampoos, I
used
the following forms of advertising:

Advertising via social networks such as: Facebook,
Zalo
,
Instargram
, .
.
.
Via this form, not
only
many
people
know about my brand,
but
I can
also
sell products and take care of customers.

Advertising on television, this form costs the most,
but
advertising on television as an affirmation of the quality of the product.

Via interviews with
famous
hairstylists, their fans will know my brand

Via
Youtube
with videos sharing how to style, take care of hair, through here
many
people
will know the brand and can reach
many
customers.
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IELTS essay I. You are setting up a new brand of shampoo from natural ingredients. How are you going to advertise it?

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4 paragraphs
120 words
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