It is quite obvious that offences are exponentially increasing day by day and it is the alarming issue of the society. I personally believe that unemployment and illiteracy are the major reasons behind it. This essay will delve deeper into causes and various protective measures to minimise the crimes.
To begin with, the first and foremost reason is lack of job opportunities to the people in the market. When the person is unable to fulfil the financial requirements of his family and meet basic survival needs than he commit a crime like robbery to earn more money within less time. Secondly, due to unawareness about the repercussions of the offence and the laws against it, results in allowing the people to commit as individuals think that they have freedom to do whatever they want to.
Thus, to stop this trend the government has to take strict actions against criminals so that they think twice before doing any sort of crime in the locality. For example, capital punishment against serious crimes, particularly rape, murder; is one of the best action to warn others. Apart from this, proper rehabilitation should be provided to the offenders and they must be treated well in the society so that they lead their normal life after imprisonment and never commit crimes again.
To conclude, although crimes are increasing due to unemployment and unawareness, however, the government and the society should join hands against crimes and with strictness and politeness, they must take measures to mitigate the crime rate.
It is quite obvious that
offences
are
exponentially
increasing day by day and it is the alarming issue of the society. I
personally
believe that unemployment and illiteracy are the major reasons behind it. This essay will delve deeper into causes and various protective measures to
minimise
the crimes.
To
begin
with, the
first
and foremost reason is lack of job opportunities to the
people
in the market. When the person is unable to fulfil the financial requirements of his family and
meet
basic survival
needs
than he
commit
a
crime
like robbery to earn more money within less time.
Secondly
, due to unawareness about the repercussions of the
offence
and the laws against it, results in allowing the
people
to commit as individuals
think
that they have freedom to do whatever they want to.
Thus
, to
stop
this trend the
government
has to
take strict actions against criminals
so
that they
think
twice
before
doing any sort of
crime
in the locality.
For example
, capital punishment against serious
crimes
,
particularly
rape, murder; is one of the best action to warn others. Apart from this, proper rehabilitation should
be provided
to the
offenders and
they
must
be treated
well in the society
so
that they lead their normal life after imprisonment and never commit
crimes
again.
To conclude
, although
crimes
are increasing due to unemployment and unawareness,
however
, the
government
and the society should
join
hands against
crimes
and with strictness and politeness, they
must
take measures to mitigate the
crime
rate.
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