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Motorways is helpful for people for traveling and it can cover long distance .write the problems caused by motorwats and it's solutions

Motorways is helpful for people for traveling and it can cover long distance. write the problems caused by motorwats and it's solutions 5axRB
Irrefutably, in this cutting edge of era, transportation shows proliferation due to which masses can travel one place to another bye consuming less time, albeit, it also causes plenty of problems those I will articulate in upcoming segments. At the outset, I would like to talk about the issues those are causing by the mushrooming number of vehicles. The first and foremost problem created by the same is pollution. As we all know that pollution is now at the peak point only because of the highest number of Motor vehicles. As when vehicles are moving, it produces the harmful gases which further make the air pollution. To an epitome, from past to present, vehicles are increasing day by day.
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, in this cutting edge of era, transportation
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shows
proliferation due to which masses can travel one place to another bye consuming less time, albeit, it
also
causes
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plenty
of problems those I will articulate in upcoming segments. At the outset, I would like to talk about the issues those are causing by the mushrooming number of
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vehicles
. The
first
and foremost problem created by the same is pollution. As we all know that pollution is
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now
at the peak point
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only
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because
of the highest number of Motor
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vehicles
. As when
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vehicles
are moving, it produces the harmful gases which
further
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make
the air pollution. To an epitome, from past to present,
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vehicles
are increasing day by day.
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IELTS essay Motorways is helpful for people for traveling and it can cover long distance. write the problems caused by motorwats and it's solutions

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