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Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is observed that, deaths of teenagers arising from road traffic accidents are on the increase, to solve this menace, some people are of the opinion that folks under the age of 24 should not be allowed to drive a vehicle. This essay completely agrees with this point of view because the under 24's are not wholly matured to operate a car and also, they do not yet have a sense of responsibility. First and Foremost, under the age of 24, they are not

It is observed
 that, deaths of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 arising from road traffic accidents are on the increase, to solve this menace, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are of the opinion that folks under the age of 24 should not be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to drive a vehicle. This essay completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesces
agrees
 with Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.this.this!this?this:this,this;
this


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Point
point
 of view This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the under 24's are not wholly matured to operate a car and also
, they do not yet
 have a sense of responsibility.

First
 and Foremost, under the age of 24, they are not