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Motivation and inspiration

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Let’s explain that ” what does motivation mean” Motivation is not the thing that can’t be understood with words but with practice. It means to be moved by something so strongly that it becomes an inspiration for you. Furthermore it is a discipline that helps you to achieve your life purposes and also helps to be successful. Motivation is a strong tool that helps to get ahead in our lives. As I mentioned before for being motivated we need a goal that keeps us motivated and move forward. For instance, mostly I try self –motivation. My internal desires help me stay motivated without any influence of other situations or other people. In another case, I think that if you practiced enough difficulties in the life and if you overcame all of them by yourself, without any support, it gives you strength to step ahead. Of course it is better to have some people, some friends or any family members who support you in every case, but there have been some situations in my life that, I had to make up my mind by myself. On those cases I didn’t get any support or motivation. And I had to do and had done.
Let
’s
explain
that
what does
motivation
mean”
Motivation
is not the thing that can’t
be understood
with words
but
with practice. It means to be
moved
by something
so
strongly
that it becomes an inspiration for you.
Furthermore
it is a discipline that
helps
you to achieve your life purposes and
also
helps
to be successful.

Motivation is a strong tool that
helps
to
get
ahead in our
lives
. As I mentioned
before
for
being motivated
we need a goal that
keeps
us motivated and
move
forward.

For instance
,
mostly
I try self
–motivation
. My internal desires
help
me stay motivated without any influence of other situations or other
people
. In another case, I
think
that if you practiced
enough
difficulties in the life and if you overcame all of them by yourself, without any support, it gives you strength to step ahead. Of
course it
is better to have
some
people
,
some
friends or any family members who support you in every case,
but
there have been
some
situations in my life that, I had to
make
up my mind by myself. On those cases I didn’t
get
any support or
motivation
. And I had to do and had done.
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IELTS essay Motivation and inspiration

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
202 words
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