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Most societies has its homeless people.some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money.

As we all know every country has some homeless peoples and they do have some basic needs to survive. So they need food to feed their belly, clothes to wear and shelter is the necessary thing for them. So i believe that giving cash to them is not enough to takle these problems in long term. If we gave them specific amount of money they spend this cash on buying food and clothes. With this limited cash they wouldn't fulfill their all needs permanently. Although, we should gave them a good job with that they can fulfill their all needs. when they have job they can earned moneny on weelky or monthly bases regularly. In this way they takle their problems more effectively rather then giving money to them. Hence, in my perspective giving money to homeless wouldn't change their life permanently.

As we all know every country has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 homeless Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).peoples, and
peoples and
 they do have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 basic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
 to survive. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 food to feed their belly, clothes to wear and shelter is the necessary thing for them. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 believe that giving cash to them is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to Possible spelling mistake found.taketabletaletackle
takle
 these problems in long term. If we gave them specific amount of money they spend this cash on buying food and clothes. With this limited cash they wouldn't fulfill their all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
permanently
. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, we should The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "give"give
gave
 them a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 job with that they can fulfill their all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 they have Possible agreement error – use past participle here: "jobbed".jobbed
job
 they can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "earn"earn
earned
Possible spelling mistake found.money
moneny
 on Possible spelling mistake found.weekly
weelky
 or monthly bases regularly
. In this way they Possible spelling mistake found.taketabletaletackle
takle
 their problems more effectively
rather
Did you mean "than"? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.than
then
 giving money to them. Hence
, in my perspective giving money to homeless wouldn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 their Did you mean "lives"?lives
life
permanently
. 