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Most schools are planning to replace sport and exercise classes with more academic sessions. How will this change affect children’s lives in your view?

Most schools are planning to replace sport and exercise classes with more academic sessions. How will this change affect children’s lives in your view? XAJA

The debate between where to allocate valuable teaching resources probably started with the first educational institutions. In present-day society the conflict continues and rightly so. In my opinion converting sports classes to more traditional subjects has two significant advantages. Firstly, it is a more effective use of a student’s time. Secondly, in the future, academic skills are more useful. time spent learning.

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 with the first
 educational institutions. In present-day society the conflict continues and rightly
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. In my opinion converting sports classes to more traditional subjects has two significant advantages. Firstly
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 of a student’s time. Secondly
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 are more useful.

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 spent learning. 