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Most schools are planning to replace sport and exercise classes with more academic sessions. How will this change affect children’s lives in your view?

Most schools are planning to replace sport and exercise classes with more academic sessions. How will this change affect children’s lives in your view? XAJA
The debate between where to allocate valuable teaching resources probably started with the first educational institutions. In present-day society the conflict continues and rightly so. In my opinion converting sports classes to more traditional subjects has two significant advantages. Firstly, it is a more effective use of a student’s time. Secondly, in the future, academic skills are more useful. time spent learning.
The debate between where to allocate valuable teaching resources
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educational institutions. In present-day society the conflict continues and
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. In my opinion converting sports classes to more traditional subjects has two significant advantages.
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of a student’s time.
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IELTS essay Most schools are planning to replace sport and exercise classes with more academic sessions. How will this change affect children’s lives in your view?

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