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Most people today prefer to socialize online rather than spending time with friends and local community. Discuss Advantages more than disadvantages

Most people today prefer to socialize online rather than spending time with friends and local community. Discuss Advantages more than disadvantages 2PlMM
Keeping in view communication through social applications is burgeoning at an alarming rate compared to face to face communication. Although mostly people give preference to social media instead of spending time with their near and dear ones, yet face to face communication get more brings. Firstly, this essay I will discuss why online communication put adverse impact on relationships and secondly a few merits of online chating.
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through social applications is burgeoning at an alarming rate compared to
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face
to
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face
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communication
. Although
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people
give preference to social media
instead
of spending time with their near and dear ones,
yet
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face
to
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face
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communication
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more brings.
Firstly
, this essay I will discuss why online
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communication
put adverse impact on relationships and
secondly
a few merits of online
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chating
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IELTS essay Most people today prefer to socialize online rather than spending time with friends and local community. Discuss Advantages more than disadvantages

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  American English
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