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Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?

Significant part of society is willing to receive an impartial information from all newsmakers. It is agreed that nowadays most news is mainly made of copy-paste stlyled rumors, disregarding the real mission of newspapaers of delivering trustworthy data and own analysis. In my opinion information delivered to mass has a huge percentage of fakeness and need to be thoroughly filtered. We surely all have faced with news with different interpretations in various sources wich made us suspicious which source was genuine. I believe newsmakers adulterate the information they possess for the only reason - to attract more subsrcribers, to gain more likes and views, as it is commonly practiced today. From my own example i remember a news concerning the ending of hostilities in the Karabakh conflict on 8th of october, but it later turned up a fake news pursuing just to increase website's visitors number. To understand the role of newspaper we must take a look to past decades. Mainly, before the beginning of the internet era the only comprehensive source of information and news used to be a newspaper. Yes, we had and still have televison, where you could find news every hour, but people by that time preferred newspapers to tv news. It is obvious, in newspapers you are granted not only with news, but even real deep analysed information of editors, wich plays vital role in shaping public opinion. As a conclusion we can definitely state that society is lost in the huge amount of fake and subjective news and have no time to trace the authenticity of it. People just need real and objective information for the right navigation in informational flow.
Significant part of society is willing to receive an impartial
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from all newsmakers. It is
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agreed
that nowadays most
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news
is
mainly
made of copy-paste
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rumors, disregarding the real mission of
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newspapaers
of delivering trustworthy data and
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own
analysis. In my opinion
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information
delivered to mass has a huge percentage of
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fakeness
and need to be
thoroughly
filtered. We
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surely all
have faced with
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news
with
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different
interpretations in various
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sources
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wich
made us suspicious which source was genuine. I believe newsmakers adulterate the
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information
they possess for the
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only
reason
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-
to attract more
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subsrcribers
, to gain more likes and views, as it is
commonly
practiced
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today
. From my
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example
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remember a
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news
concerning the ending of hostilities in the Karabakh conflict on 8th of
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october
,
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but
it later turned up a fake
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news
pursuing
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to increase website's visitors number. To understand the role of
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newspaper
we
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must
take a look to past decades.
Mainly
,
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before
the beginning of the internet era the
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only
comprehensive source of
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information
and
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news
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used
to be a
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newspaper
. Yes, we had and
still
have
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televison
, where you could find
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news
every hour,
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people
by that time preferred
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newspapers
to
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tv
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. It is obvious, in
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you
are granted
not
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with
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,
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even real deep
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analysed
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information
of editors,
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wich
plays vital role in shaping public opinion. As a conclusion we can definitely state that society
is lost
in the huge amount of fake and subjective
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news
and have no time to trace the authenticity of it.
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People
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just
need real and objective
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information
for the right navigation in informational flow.
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IELTS essay Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?

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