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Most people prefer to socialize online rather than meeting peers at local community. DO DISADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH ADVENTAGES

Most people prefer to socialize online rather than meeting peers at local community. DO DISADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH ADVENTAGES WYGGW

Undoubtedly, socializing online plays a paramount significane in human's life and most of individuals prefer to connect online rather than meeting peers personally. This notion has both merits and demerits and this easy will discuss both the views in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, socializing online has various advantages. First and foremost, it helps to connect with friends and family members who stays away. To be more precise, their is no other option to remain in touch the one's who lives Way. social media is only way be in touch also a person can easily find friends who were lost during studies. For example, Face time or goggle duo users are increased within short span of time. Thus this benefit is helping a lot. Alternatively, there are various benefits of meeting personally also. Initially, a person can easily understand expressions behind the individuals with whom they are in contact. To explicate, with face to face contact bond between individuals get stronger and it a quality of confidence develops. Moreover, it makes a person to be active in debates as well. To present an epitome, it is being observed that people who contact and communicate personally often take part on debates. To conclude, both the communicating online as well as personally have merits. So I belive that both have merits and demerits equal.

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online
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most of individuals
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online
rather
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. This notion has both merits and demerits and this easy will discuss both the views in forthcoming paragraphs.

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online
 has various advantages. First
 and foremost, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to connect with friends and family members You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
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stays
 away. To be more precise, Did you mean "there"?there
their
 is no other option to remain in touch the one's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
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social
 media is Please check whether an article is missing: "a only".a only
only
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 a person can easily
 find friends You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
were lost
 during studies. For example
, Face time or goggle duo users are increased
 within short span of time. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Thus,
Thus
 this benefit is helping a lot.

Alternatively
, there are various benefits of meeting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withindividuallyprivatelydirectly
personally
also
. Initially
, a person can easily
 understand expressions behind the individuals with whom they are in contact. To explicate, with face to face contact bond between individuals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 stronger and it a quality of confidence develops. Moreover
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 a person to be active in debates as well
. To present an epitome, it is being observed
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 contact and communicate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withindividuallyprivatelydirectly
personally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 on debates.

To conclude
, both the communicating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
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as well as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withindividuallyprivatelydirectly
personally
 have merits. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
Did you mean "I believe"?I believe
I belive
 that both have merits and demerits equal. 