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How was your favourite singer .tell something about him .l

How was your favourite singer. tell something about him. l LwqEG
My favourite singers is Babbu man. he is leading article in Punjabi music industry. and he won many achievements in singing. When hi sing the song his voice is so soft. he is down to earth. with singing he do work in films also. And whenever I go outside for traveling mostly I listened his songs only. In Punjabi music industry no one compete with bim. His is the legent of music industry. And in partys or in wedding mostly people play his songs only for more enjoyment. And in all countries whenever he start singing in big counting people will came to listion his music
My
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favourite
singers is
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Babbu
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man
.
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he
is leading article in Punjabi
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music
industry.
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and
he won
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many
achievements in singing.
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When
hi sing the song his voice is
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so
soft.
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he
is down to earth.
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with
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singing he
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do
work in films
also
. And whenever I go outside for traveling
mostly
I listened his songs
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only
. In Punjabi
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music
industry no one compete with
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bim
. His is the
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legent
of
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music
industry.

And in
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partys
or in wedding
mostly
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people
play his songs
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only
for more enjoyment. And in all countries whenever he
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start
singing in
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big
counting
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people
will came to
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listion
his
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music

IELTS essay How was your favourite singer. tell something about him. l

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
105 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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