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Humanity is powerful don’t take advantage of it

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people may help you not because they are fools, they help you because their humanity push them to be human people may help you not because they are fools, they help you because their humanity push them to be human people may help you not because they are fools, they help you because their humanity push them to be human people may help you not because they are fools, they help you because their humanity push them to be human people may help you not because they are fools, they help you because their humanity push them to be human
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people
may
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help
you not
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because
they are
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fools
, they
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help
you
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because
their
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humanity
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push
them to be human

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people
may
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
you not
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because
they are
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fools
, they
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help
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humanity
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push
them to be human
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IELTS essay Humanity is powerful don’t take advantage of it

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
99 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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