Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Most people like watching TV instead of reading books or doing some useful activities. Discuss both sides of this arguments

Most people like watching TV instead of reading books or doing some useful activities. Discuss both sides of this arguments j8mo1
In the technology age, the role of mass media is so paramount that the life cannot be imagined without. The increasing rate of television can even be seen the world over. The claim that watching television is harmful for teenagers is an argumentative issue that is both supported or refuted by many people. This essay will evaluate both pros and cons of this argumentative issue before a reasoned conclusion is made. For one, most people regard that watching television channels and programs are great way of spending leisure time. For instance, it is justified by doctors that watching television acts as a source of forgetting about the pain for patients who should keep themselves in bed. It is commonly observed that patients or older generation prefer observing world news from watching breaking news. Therefore, it is easy to see the importance of green screen in the daily life. However, people often argue that sitting in front of the television is waste of time. People often hold this opinion because most of them do not want to do their housework because of television. It can lead to some problems like laziness or obesity. Thus, it goes without saying that this viewpoint is credible and realistic. To recapitulate, it is regarded that television is enjoyable factor for old people and patients who have to stay in bed all day while others believe that it is not good idea for spending time. Taking into consideration both these sets of argument, it is evident that television may be dangerous for young and old generation. It is predicted that humanity will realise the disadvantages of mass media and avoid from using it a lot.
In the technology age, the role of mass media is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
paramount that the life cannot
be imagined
without. The increasing rate of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
can even be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
the world over. The claim that watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
is harmful for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
is an argumentative issue
that is
both supported or refuted by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. This essay will evaluate both pros and cons of this argumentative issue
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
a reasoned conclusion
is made
. For one, most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
regard that watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
channels and programs are
Please check whether an article is missing: "a great".
great
way of spending leisure time.
For instance
, it
is justified
by doctors that watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
acts as a source of forgetting about the pain for patients who should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
themselves in bed. It is
commonly
observed that patients or older generation prefer observing world news from watching breaking news.
Therefore
, it is easy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the importance of green screen in the daily life.
However
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
argue that sitting in front of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
is waste of time.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
hold this opinion
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
most of them do not want to do their housework
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
. It can lead to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
problems like laziness or obesity.
Thus
, it goes without saying that this viewpoint is credible and realistic. To recapitulate, it
is regarded
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
is enjoyable factor for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and patients who
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
stay in bed all day while others believe that it is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
for spending time. Taking into consideration both these sets of argument, it is evident that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
may be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
for young and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
generation. It
is predicted
that humanity will
Possible spelling mistake. 'realise' is British English.
realise
the disadvantages of mass media and avoid from using it a lot.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Most people like watching TV instead of reading books or doing some useful activities. Discuss both sides of this arguments

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
279 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5.5band
    Did ragging should be banned or not?
    College Life plays a very important role in everyones life. But in these days the reports by students of being ragged by their seniors are increasing ragularly. Therefore, most of the people think, this trend of ragging should be banned, but on the other hand some people feels that it should not be ...
  • 6band
    When designing a building, the function is more important than the outward appearance.
    Some people opine that during designing any building, the function is commonly more significant than the exterior design. From my perspective, I agree with this statement for a number of reasons. To begin with, it has to be said that a beauty and unique appearance is the first thing people fell for...
  • 5band
    describe a favourite job that you would like to do when you finish university
    I have always wanted to become an actor for any kind of film from a premiere to blockbusters when I was knee-high to a grasshopper. The process of acting and preparing for a film is what I find intriguing and fascinating. I’d probably enjoy working and being trained in such a flexible and dynamic e...
  • 6band
    Man goes through a lot of changes
    Man goes through a lot of changes starting from the time when he depicted a herd of to current sitting on his desk with a cup of coffee and coding however the technology has been enhanced a lot. The 20th century has made so many changes in developing computer generations in addition to this has reac...
  • 6band
    Man goes through a plethora of changes starting
    Man goes through a plethora of changes starting from the time when he depicted a herd of to current sitting on his desk with a cup of coffee and coding however the technology has been enhanced a lot. The 20th century has made consequently a plethora of changes in developing computer generations in a...
  • 6band
    what changes has 20th century made
    Man goes through a plethora of changes starting from the time when he depicted a herd of to current sitting on his desk with a cup of coffee and coding however the technology has been enhanced a lot. The 20th century has made consequently a plethora of changes in developing computer generations in a...