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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues To what extent to do agree or disagree with this statement

Most people do not care enough about environmental issues To what extent to do agree or disagree with this statement G2bo

It is obvious that environmental issues are increasing fast. How ever, unfortunately most people do not take it seriously. I strongly do not agree with this behaviour. The most important reason is that the planet will have been destructed over a long time and it will impact on lives slightly. So people can not comprehend their effects, for example some daily habits such as using daily water bottle and toxic chemical cleaner will affect the negative influences on the earth. The plastic which is used in the bottle requires giant amounts of fossil fuels to make and to transport and the pollution which is an integral part of the sea contributed by toxic chemical cleaners which are conducted by water to the oceans. Another reason is that people are not concern about future generation. Furthermore the high petrol and animal food consumption will bring deprivation in future. In conclusion, Most people do not care enough about environmental issues To what extent to do agree or disagree with this statement.

It is obvious that environmental issues are increasing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
. Did you mean "however"?However
How ever
, unfortunately most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 do not take it seriously
. I strongly
 do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
. The most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 reason is that the planet will have been destructed
 over a long time and it will impact on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
slightly
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can not comprehend their effects, for example
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 daily habits such as using daily water bottle and toxic chemical cleaner will affect the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 influences on the earth. The plastic which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in the bottle requires giant amounts of fossil fuels to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 and to transport and the pollution which is an integral part of the sea contributed by toxic chemical cleaners which are conducted
 by water to the oceans. Another reason is that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are not concern about future generation. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
 the high petrol and animal food consumption will bring deprivation Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. In conclusion
, Most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 do not care This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 about environmental issues To what extent to do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 or disagree with this statement. 