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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays the environmental problems are slowly having global attention due to the protests and activists as Greta Thunberg, yet we are still too far away from a real change. Indeed, most of the people do not care about environmental issues for many different reasons: they do not believe in it, do not think they have the power to change it or do not think is their problem, but of future’s generations. Actually environmental issues are a matter of fact that cannot be denied: scientists and experts have been warning for years all the world about it, nevertheless nobody wanted to listen to them. Someone could say that this is no longer true, because of a several numbers of industries changes in their politics. This cannot be negated: even Mcdonald’s has replaced its plastic straw with paper ones but, on the other hand, their intensive farming is still going on. The issue we are facing has not one simple answer such paper’s packaging, yet has multiples faces: pollution, climatic change and so go on. A sweeping point has been reached in these last years, however there still are an innumerable amount of problems which have to be solved through our life style. For instance, we should stop throwing objects when they are broken or are not working anyomore and start fixing them, instead of buying new ones. Moreover, I believe that sensibilisation campaigns may help to introduce everyone to the problem and people may learn hot to recycle properly and why it is so crucial. From my perspective, a real change will happens only when important and valuable industries will decide to change: in the meanwhile it is helpful and essential to change our bad habits because every action counts.
Nowadays the environmental
problems
are
slowly
having global attention due to the protests and activists as Greta Thunberg,
yet
we are
still
too far away from a real
change
.
Indeed
, most of the
people
do not care about environmental issues for
many
different
reasons: they do not believe in it, do not
think
they have the power to
change
it or do not
think
is their
problem
,
but
of future’s generations.

Actually environmental issues are a matter of fact that cannot
be denied
: scientists and experts have been warning for years all the world about it,
nevertheless
nobody wanted to listen to them. Someone could say that this is no longer true,
because
of a several numbers of industries
changes
in their politics. This cannot
be negated
: even
Mcdonald
’s has replaced its plastic straw with paper
ones
but
,
on the other hand
, their intensive farming is
still
going on. The issue we are facing has not one simple answer such paper’s packaging,
yet
has multiples faces: pollution, climatic
change
and
so
go on.

A sweeping point has
been reached
in these last years,
however
there
still
are an innumerable amount of
problems
which
have to
be solved
through our life style.
For instance
, we should
stop
throwing objects when they
are broken
or are not working
anyomore
and
start
fixing them,
instead
of buying new
ones
.
Moreover
, I believe that
sensibilisation
campaigns may
help
to introduce everyone to the
problem
and
people
may learn hot to recycle
properly
and why it is
so
crucial.

From my perspective, a real
change
will
happens
only
when
important
and valuable industries will decide to
change
: in the meanwhile it is helpful and essential to
change
our
bad
habits
because
every action counts.
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IELTS essay Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.

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