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Most people are of the opinion that the best way to improve the air quality in cities is to reduce the number of vehicles on roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Most people are of the opinion that the best way to improve the air quality in cities is to reduce the number of vehicles on roads. wB9Pl
It is obviuos that it is more advantegeous to decrease the number of transports on roads in order to make the quality better in cities. I completely disagree with this opinion and thnki that vehicles are much more important than the air quality. First of all, i believe thar most significant benefits of car are saving time. Without a car, your daily schedule may face many unwanted changes. Time is gold and having a car can help your reduce downtime. That's why it is mote important to have vehicles in order to save time. Secondly, the obviuos use of vehicles is for commuting needs. In other words, you and everyone use vehicles to get to work, visit another country and so far so forth. To sum ap, I strongly believe that vehicles are more beneficial than reducing because they save people's time and move easily from one side to another.
It is
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obviuos
that it is more
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advantegeous
to decrease the number of transports on roads in order to
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make
the quality better in cities. I completely disagree with this opinion and
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thnki
that
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vehicles
are much more
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important
than the air quality.
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First of all
,
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i
believe
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thar
most significant benefits of car are saving
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time
. Without a car, your daily schedule may face
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many
unwanted
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changes
.
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Time
is gold and having a car can
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help
your
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reduce
downtime. That's why it is mote
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important
to have
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vehicles
in order to save
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time
.
Secondly
, the
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obviuos
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use
of
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vehicles
is for commuting needs.
In other words
, you and everyone
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use
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vehicles
to
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get
to work, visit another country and
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so
far
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so
forth. To sum
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ap
, I
strongly
believe that
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vehicles
are more beneficial than reducing
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because
they save
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people
's
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time
and
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move
easily
from one side to another.

IELTS essay Most people are of the opinion that the best way to improve the air quality in cities is to reduce the number of vehicles on roads.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
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