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What is your dream job as kids? When I was a kid, my parents like to ask what I want to be when I grew up. I never imagine my current position will exist.

What is your dream job as kids? When I was a kid, my parents like to ask what I want to be when I grew up. I never imagine my current position will exist. DlxlA

What is your dream job as kids? When I was a kid, my parents like to ask what I want to be when I grew up. I never imagine my current position will exist. While I am 6 years old, I want to be a stewardess because I like to look beautiful all time and I dream to travel all around the world. Thankfully, I did not become a stewardess, because, the covid come in 2019 and we cannot travel anywhere except travel in our home from the living room to the kitchen because of the lockdown. Then, during primary school, I change my ambition to engineer because people say being an engineer can be rich quickly and look cool. Until I entered high school, I change my ambition to work in the IT field. Because I believe technology is the future. So right now, I work that related to the future and still not rich yet. My journey still not end yet. There is a long path I need to go. How about you?

What is your dream job as kids?

When I was a kid, my parents like to ask what I want to be when I grew up. I never imagine my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 position will exist.

While I am 6 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
, I want to be a stewardess This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I like to look This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 all time and I dream to travel all around the world. Thankfully
, I did not become a stewardess, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
, the Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
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2019 and
 we cannot travel anywhere except travel in our home from the living room to the kitchen This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the lockdown.

Then, during primary school, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my ambition to engineer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 say being an engineer can be rich quickly
 and look cool.

Until I entered high school, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my ambition to work in the IT field. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I believe technology is the future.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, I work that related to the future and still
 not rich yet
. My journey still
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
yet
. There is a long path I need to go.

How about you? 