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Most of the big cities are overpopulated. Why do people still move to big cities? Give your opinions and examples.

Most of the big cities are overpopulated. Why do people still move to big cities? Give your opinions and examples. m1Lrr
Clearly, at present, people more like to go to big cities while the gigantic cities are suffering of over population. However, most of those cases people go to large towns for its' benefits which are more the small ones'. First, standard lifestyle is a benefiting side of large cities. In those cities people can lead their life in an extraordinary way. For example: there are many tremendous and huge shopping malls from where people can easily buy their daily necessaries and goods. Furthermore, different types of jobs could be found here. It is a great fascinating side of giant towns. Whatever, why won't the people of small ones' come to giant cities whither they can find a playthora of jobs in the gigantic cities? Actually, a lot of humans go to these types of cities to get a work. In addition, the entertainment facilities of huge cities are better than the small ones'. In large towns, we can go to many cinema halls where we can see many cinemas which are a great source of fun. It is very helpful to refresh one's mind and it helps a people to make him happy, pleasant and cheerful. There are a number of stadiums in giant cities where children can various types of games and sports which are a superb source of amusement. For example: cricket, football, basketball, badminton etc. To sum up, clearly it is true that people only think about the facilities of giant cities. That's why people still move to big cities while gigantic cities are suffering of over population.
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, at present,
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people
more like to go to
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big
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cities
while the gigantic
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cities
are
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suffering of
over population.
However
, most of those cases
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people
go to large towns for
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its'
benefits which are more the
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small
ones'.
First
, standard lifestyle is a benefiting side of large
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cities
. In those
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cities
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people
can lead their life
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in an extraordinary way
.
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: there are
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many
tremendous and huge shopping malls from where
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people
can
easily
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buy
their daily necessaries and
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goods
.
Furthermore
,
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different
types of jobs could
be found
here. It is a great fascinating side of
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giant
towns. Whatever, why won't the
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people
of
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small
ones'
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come
to
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giant
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cities
whither they can find a
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playthora
of jobs in the gigantic
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cities
? Actually,
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a lot of
humans go to these types of
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cities
to
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get
a work.
In addition
, the entertainment facilities of huge
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cities
are better than the
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small
ones'. In large towns, we can go to
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many
cinema halls where we can
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see
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many
cinemas which are a great source of fun. It is
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very
helpful to refresh one's mind and it
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helps
a
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people
to
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make
him happy, pleasant and cheerful. There are a number of stadiums in
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giant
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cities
where children can various types of games and sports which are a superb source of amusement.
For example
: cricket, football, basketball, badminton etc. To sum up,
clearly
it is true that
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people
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only
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think
about the facilities of
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giant
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cities
. That's why
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people
still
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move
to
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big
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cities
while gigantic
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cities
are
The usual preposition for this expression is "from" or "with." Did you mean "suffering from" or "suffering with"?
suffering of
over population.
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IELTS essay Most of the big cities are overpopulated. Why do people still move to big cities? Give your opinions and examples.

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