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Most of species, which are living or surviving in the world, always have their reasons to appear such as animal, plants,…

Most of species, which are living or surviving in the world, always have their reasons to appear such as animal, plants, … 6ag63
Most of species, which are living or surviving in the world, always have their reasons to appear such as animal, plants, …. They always make some roles for their life, for instance, animals species are supplying mainly the sources of food for the human beings or plants are getting the oxygens to help people can breath. Anything, Nevertheless, must be in natural process even include animal species. However, humans have the instinctive thought that they are more improving then the animals. Following my opinion, humans can use their outstanding knowledge to hinder the animal species from becoming extinct. First of all, People can limit their industries especially in the fuel-industries. Given that, they make the change of climates in the earth. The North Pole, for example, in recent decades has changed with the negative ways. A lot of ices in there have been melted making the areas of some animal species disappear and they don’t have anywhere to live. Moreover, This makes they can find out the food to survive. Secondly, Humans are still having lots of zoo or reserved regions for the animals. In a year, we have seen many news in the internet or newspapers, magazines about some animals get in trouble in the residence areas, the citizens here don’t know how to help him so that they can call the staffs of the zoos or reserved regions to help them get in the best living areas before getting them back to the natural places.
After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ("Most of the species") or simply say "Most species".
Most of species
, which are living or surviving in the world, always have their reasons to appear such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
, plants, …. They always
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make
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some
roles for their life,
for instance
,
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animals
species are supplying
mainly
the sources of food for the
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human
beings or plants are getting the
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oxygens
to
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help
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people
can
Did you mean the verb "breathe"? 'breath' is a noun.
breath
. Anything,
Nevertheless
,
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must
be in natural process even include
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animal
species.
However
,
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humans
have the instinctive
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thought
that they are more improving then the
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animals
. Following my opinion,
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humans
can
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use
their outstanding knowledge to hinder the
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animal
species from becoming extinct.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
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People
can limit their industries
especially
in the fuel-industries.
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Given
that, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
of climates in the earth. The North Pole,
for example
, in recent decades has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
with the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
ways.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
A lot of
ices in there have
been melted
making the areas of
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some
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animal
species
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
disappear and
they don’t have anywhere to
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live
.
Moreover
, This
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makes
they can find out the food to survive.

Secondly
,
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Humans
are
still
having
Possible agreement error. The noun zoo seems to be countable; consider using: "lots of zoos".
lots of zoo
or reserved regions for the
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animals
. In a year, we have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much news", "a good deal of news".
many news
in the internet or newspapers, magazines about
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
in trouble in the residence areas, the citizens here don’t know how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
him
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so
that they can call the staffs of the zoos or reserved regions to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
in the best living areas
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
getting them back to the natural places.
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IELTS essay Most of species, which are living or surviving in the world, always have their reasons to appear such as animal, plants, …

Essay
  American English
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247 words
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