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work independently helps people have ownership

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For instance, when I worked as part of a marketing team in my previous job, I usually needed to cooperate with not only my team members but also sales team to reach the sales goal. However, since we all worked hard for the same goal, it is difficult to distinguish who is responsible for the final success. It could be very frustrating when my boss gave all credits to the sales team and neglect my efforts. It wasn’t until I left the company and started my own business I realized that working independently empowers me to have my own work and find my sense of accomplishment.

For instance
, when I worked as part of a marketing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
 in my previous job, I usually
 needed to cooperate with not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
 members This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 sales You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
 to reach the sales goal. However
, since we all worked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for the same goal, it is difficult to distinguish who is responsible for the final success. It could be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 frustrating when my boss gave all credits to the sales You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
 and neglect my efforts. It wasn’t until I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 business I realized that working independently
 empowers me to have my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 work and find my sense of accomplishment. 