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Most favourite film of yours

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Most my favourite film is Neerja because it's shows, how a girl sacrifice life for others this is a real story and the girl name was Neerja. Neerja Bhanot, Ashoka Chakra was an Indian head purser who died while saving passengers on Pan Am Flight 73 which had been hijacked by terrorists from a terrorist organization during a stopover in Karachi, Pakistan, on 5 September 1986, just two days before her 23rd birthday
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IELTS essay Most favourite film of yours

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72 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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