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More students are travelling abroad for further education. Do you believe the advantages of this experience are greater than the drawbacks associated with it?

More students are travelling abroad for further education. Do you believe the advantages of this experience are greater than the drawbacks associated with it? wWoe

Since the last ten years, there are many more students who travel abroad to study to international universities. I will investigate the advantages and disadvantages on this pattern in this essay. First of all, studying abroad is exciting and you can meet a lot of persons from other countries. You can find opportunities to study new subjects you are not finding at your home town university. Yet, you can be feeling lonely and feeling homesickness from time to time. As example, I have had this experience when I visited Japan for my study experience three years ago.

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 more students who travel abroad to study to international universities. I will investigate the advantages and disadvantages on this pattern in this essay. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
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 persons from other countries. You can find opportunities to study new subjects you are not finding at your home town university. Yet
, you can be feeling lonely and feeling homesickness from time to time. As example, I have had this experience when I visited Japan for my study experience three years ago. 