Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

More people rae overweight than past i will discuss reason

More people rae overweight than past i will discuss reason bx1wX
In modern era some people opine that nowadays masses are overweight than past i will agree this notion and discuss both sides with relevant examples. To embark upon, there are several reasons of obesity. Fist and farmost reason is people have busy schedule and they do not make food at home te prefer to eat outside meals. So, they become fatty and also suffer from deseases like as heartattack, obesity and so on
In modern era
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
opine that nowadays masses are
Use "(overweight)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
overweight
than past
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
this notion and discuss both sides with relevant examples. To embark upon, there are several reasons of obesity. Fist and
Possible spelling mistake found.
farmost
reason is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have busy
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
schedule and
they do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
food at home
Possible spelling mistake found.
te
prefer to eat outside meals.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, they become fatty and
also
suffer from
Possible spelling mistake found.
deseases
like as
Possible spelling mistake found.
heartattack
, obesity and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on

IELTS essay More people rae overweight than past i will discuss reason

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • More people rae overweight than past i will discuss reason