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More people rae overweight than past i will discuss reason

More people rae overweight than past i will discuss reason bx1wX

In modern era some people opine that nowadays masses are overweight than past i will agree this notion and discuss both sides with relevant examples. To embark upon, there are several reasons of obesity. Fist and farmost reason is people have busy schedule and they do not make food at home te prefer to eat outside meals. So, they become fatty and also suffer from deseases like as heartattack, obesity and so on

In modern era This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 opine that nowadays masses are Use "(overweight)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(overweight)
overweight
 than past Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 this notion and discuss both sides with relevant examples. To embark upon, there are several reasons of obesity. Fist and Possible spelling mistake found.far most
farmost
 reason is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have busy Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).schedule, and
schedule and
 they do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 food at home Possible spelling mistake found.theTetohewebe
te
 prefer to eat outside meals. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, they become fatty and also
 suffer from Possible spelling mistake found.diseasesdeceases
deseases
 like as Possible spelling mistake found.heart attack
heartattack
, obesity and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on