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DISCUSS THE REASONS WHY PEOPLE DEFINE HAPPINESS DIFFRENTLY , AND HOW TO OTAIN HAPPINESS ?

DISCUSS THE REASONS WHY PEOPLE DEFINE HAPPINESS DIFFRENTLY, AND HOW TO OTAIN HAPPINESS? bD5Xg
NOWADAYS HAPPPINESS IS VERY SUBJECTIVE TOPIC FOR MOST OF PEOPLE ON THE EARTH, OWING THE FACT A NUMBER OF PEOPLE ARE NOT HAPPY RESASON BEHIND IT IS A LIFE FULL OF STRESS AND WORK LOAD. GENRATION OF NOWADAYS HAVE DIFFERENTL REASON BEHIND IT, IN THIS ESSAY I WILL DISCUSS WHY PEOPLE HAVE DIFFIRENT OPTION FOR THAT. ON THE FIRST HAND, PEOPLE OF THIS GENRATION HAVE VERY OPTION AND HAVE A FUTHER OPINION FOR A SINGLE LIFE DESPITE THE FACT THAT PEOPLE ARE WORKING FOR THEIR FUTURE TO GET SUCCESSFULL IN THE LIFE DISPITE OF THIS TEY ARE GETTING INGAED IN THIER WORK FOR EXAMPLE A PERSON IS WORKING IN THE MNC FOR TWELVE HOURS AND NOT GIVING THAT OF TIME TO RELEX AND SPENT LEISUR TIME WITH THE FAMILY. ON THE OTHER HAND PEOPLE ARE GETTING DIFFERENT KIND OF HAPPIENESS ONCATIONALLY OWING THE FACT WORKING IN COPARATE ARE GETTING MORE TOUGH DAY BY DAY AND PEOPLE ARE HAVING HAPPINESS OCATIONALLY. PEOPE GET HAPPY THEM ACHIVE SOMETHING THIER LIFESPAN THEY FEEL THAT THEY ARE OVER THE TOP OF THE WORLD. ON THE CONTERARY, PEOPLE DONL'T GET THIS HAPPINESS AND OWING THE FACT OF THIS PEOPL HAVE DIFFERENT OPINION N HAPPIENESS. IF A PESON HAVING A PLEASENT DAY OR GRIZZLED EVENING THEY WILL DIFFINE THE HAPPINESS IN DIFFRENT MEANER IN CONCLUSION I WOULD LIKE TO QUAT MY ANSWER SUBSTANTAIL WAY THAT PEOPLE ARE HAVING A DEFFINATION OF HAPPIENESS IN NEMOURES WAYS DESPITE OF THIS THERE INITIAL POINT IS HAPPINESS AND THAT A GOOD WAY OF LIVING.
NOWADAYS
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HAPPPINESS
IS
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VERY
SUBJECTIVE TOPIC FOR MOST OF
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PEOPLE
ON THE EARTH, OWING THE
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FACT
A NUMBER OF
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PEOPLE
ARE NOT HAPPY
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RESASON
BEHIND IT IS A LIFE FULL OF
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STRESS
AND WORK LOAD.
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GENRATION
OF NOWADAYS HAVE
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DIFFERENTL
REASON BEHIND IT, IN THIS ESSAY I WILL DISCUSS WHY
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PEOPLE
HAVE
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DIFFIRENT
OPTION FOR THAT.

ON THE
FIRST
HAND,
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PEOPLE
OF THIS
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GENRATION
HAVE
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VERY
OPTION AND HAVE A
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FUTHER
OPINION FOR A SINGLE LIFE DESPITE THE
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FACT
THAT
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PEOPLE
ARE WORKING FOR THEIR FUTURE TO
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GET
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SUCCESSFULL
IN THE LIFE
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DISPITE
OF THIS
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TEY
ARE GETTING
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INGAED
IN
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THIER
WORK
FOR EXAMPLE
A PERSON IS WORKING IN THE
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MNC
FOR TWELVE HOURS AND NOT GIVING THAT OF TIME TO
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RELEX
AND SPENT
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LEISUR
TIME WITH THE FAMILY.

ON THE OTHER HAND
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PEOPLE
ARE GETTING
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DIFFERENT
KIND OF
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HAPPIENESS
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ONCATIONALLY
OWING THE
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FACT
WORKING IN
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COPARATE
ARE GETTING MORE TOUGH DAY BY DAY AND
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PEOPLE
ARE HAVING
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HAPPINESS
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OCATIONALLY
.
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PEOPE
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GET
HAPPY THEM
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ACHIVE
SOMETHING
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THIER
LIFESPAN THEY FEEL THAT THEY ARE OVER THE TOP OF THE WORLD. ON THE
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CONTERARY
,
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PEOPLE
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DONL
'T
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THIS
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HAPPINESS
AND OWING THE
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FACT
OF THIS
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PEOPL
HAVE
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DIFFERENT
OPINION N
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HAPPIENESS
. IF A
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PESON
HAVING A
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PLEASENT
DAY OR GRIZZLED EVENING THEY WILL
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DIFFINE
THE
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HAPPINESS
IN
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DIFFRENT
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MEANER


IN
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CONCLUSION I
WOULD LIKE TO
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QUAT
MY ANSWER
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SUBSTANTAIL
WAY THAT
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PEOPLE
ARE HAVING A
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DEFFINATION
OF
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HAPPIENESS
IN
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NEMOURES
WAYS
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DESPITE OF
THIS THERE INITIAL POINT IS
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HAPPINESS
AND THAT A
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GOOD
WAY OF LIVING.
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IELTS essay DISCUSS THE REASONS WHY PEOPLE DEFINE HAPPINESS DIFFRENTLY, AND HOW TO OTAIN HAPPINESS?

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