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more people are shopping online today than ever before

more people are shopping online today than ever before GN7Ag
To begin with, the biggest advantage of online shopping is accessibility of various websites. This can provide a variety of brands available at any time on figure tips on the internet. Although people tend to go online shopping, this can save their time. Many people are influenced by shopping online which provides discounts, gifts, and vouchers. For example, amazon offers discounts on festival time which attract a huge number of customers. Moreover, online shopping is available for twenty-four hours at any time from any place where you can do shopping. On the other hand, the disadvantage of online shopping a few websites what products they sell is duplicate and damaged products. People must be careful enough to recognise the difference. However, many top branded products are selling at a cheaper rate, this can decrease their value.
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online
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shopping
is accessibility of various websites. This can provide a variety of brands available at any
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time
on figure tips on the internet. Although
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people
tend to go
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online
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, this can save their
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.
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people
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shopping
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which provides discounts, gifts, and vouchers.
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amazon
offers discounts on festival
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which attract a huge number of customers.
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online
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shopping
is available for twenty-four hours at any
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time
from any place where you can
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do shopping
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On the other hand
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online
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shopping
a few websites what products they sell is duplicate and damaged products.
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People
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top branded products are selling at a cheaper rate, this can decrease their value.
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IELTS essay more people are shopping online today than ever before

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
136 words
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