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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countrysides and oceans What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

With increase in use of plastic, the more urban, rural and seas is getting contaminated with these plastic wastes. In this essay first I would be discussing the hardships faced by humans to animals, then we will look into some precautions that could be taken to overcome this situation. In recent years it can be seen that human beings are using more plastics than in past century. Which is taking us to several problems. First problem is with the water quality and aquatic life. This is happening due to dumping of plasticides which is cannot decomposed very easily. Therefore it leads to more aquatic death because they consume smaller parts of plastic and it not only deteriorate the quality of drinking water but also harming our sea animals. On the other hand humans throwing plastic waste at wrong places which is eaten by cows and other animals that leads to there death or impact in health of those animals which can't even speak. However, burning of these plastic bottles, polythene and other material degrades air quality. We could see an example of those countries which use lot of plastic materials it's a direct link between the lower quality of air in those specific countries this leads to lot of breathing issues. Many measures have been suggested by researchers. But few common measures which we could take are strict actions taken by government on banning of these plastics and imposing heavy fines on usage of it. We already know that these wastes cannot be decomposed easily so we can replace it with handmade paper based bags which can reused again and again without impacting the environment and animals. Second measures that could be taken that even if we use these plastics try to decompose it into deep land and throw these wastes at proper place so that it benifits humanity. In last, I would conclude by saying that these plastic waste is enemy to our nature so we have to minimize its use and take immediate actions and replace these polythene to paper bags. Which will save both human and animal life. It could be only achieved by strict approach of government and people attentiveness towards this cause.
With increase in
use
of
plastic
, the more urban, rural and seas is getting contaminated with these
plastic
wastes
. In this essay
first
I would be discussing the hardships faced by
humans
to
animals
, then we will look into
some
precautions that could
be taken
to overcome this situation.

In recent years it can be
seen
that
human
beings are using more
plastics
than in past century.
Which
is taking us to several problems.
First
problem is with the water
quality
and aquatic life. This is happening due to dumping of
plasticides
which is cannot
decomposed
very
easily
.
Therefore
it leads to more aquatic death
because
they consume smaller parts of
plastic
and it not
only
deteriorate the
quality
of drinking water
but
also
harming our sea
animals
.
On the other hand
humans
throwing
plastic
waste
at
wrong
places which
is eaten
by cows and other
animals
that leads to there death or impact in health of those
animals
which can't even speak.
However
, burning of these
plastic
bottles, polythene and other material degrades air
quality
. We could
see
an example of those countries which
use
lot of
plastic
materials it's a direct link between the lower
quality
of air in those specific countries this leads to lot of breathing issues.

Many
measures have
been suggested
by researchers.
But
few common measures which we could take are strict actions taken by
government
on banning of these
plastics
and imposing heavy fines on usage of it. We already know that these
wastes
cannot
be decomposed
easily
so
we can replace it with handmade paper based bags which can reused again and again without impacting the environment and
animals
. Second measures that could
be taken
that even if we
use
these
plastics
try to decompose it into deep land and throw these
wastes
at proper place
so
that it
benifits
humanity.

In last, I would conclude by saying that these
plastic
waste
is enemy to our nature
so
we
have to
minimize its
use
and take immediate actions and replace
these polythene
to paper bags. Which will save both
human
and
animal
life. It could be
only
achieved by strict approach of
government
and
people
attentiveness towards this cause.
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IELTS essay More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countrysides and oceans What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
367 words
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