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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countrysides, and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countrysides, and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken? m1WD8
The amount of plastic waste dramatically increases a recent century because it is convenient due to being possible to make a various form of products for an affordable price, whereas plastic waste raises environmental problems. This essay shows that what issues happen from plastic garbage and what measurement against the problems. The major issue is the serious influence of sea creatures eating microplastic that the size of the plastic waste is less than 5mm. Plastic waste produced in cities or suburbs carries to the ocean by browning wind or flowing rivers. The garbage becomes smaller due to degradation casing by sunlight or repetition of impact; as a result, ocean creatures absorb their body to eat it directly or feeds, which are microorganisms consuming microplastic. Consequently, sea creatures die or get critical illness for they cannot attribute the rubbish. There are some measurements, which are a decrease amount of plastic waste and protection throwing correct the trash, against this problem. The first solution is that people should decline the consumption of plastic products. For instance, customers can replace use from a plastic shopping bag or bottled water to a reusable shopping bag and a water bottle. In addition to this, some plastic items that are difficult to use alternative material should manufacture from bio-degradable plastic. The second solution is that civils should observe the rule of trashing plastic waste because it can lead to recycle easily and prevent to emit the garbage for the ocean. In conclusion, plastic waste causes danger for ocean creatures, and the countermeasures are that people should use eco-friendly goods and throw trash cans correctly.
The amount of
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plastic
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waste
dramatically
increases a recent century
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because
it is convenient due to being possible to
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make
a various form of products for an affordable price, whereas
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plastic
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waste
raises environmental problems.

This essay
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shows
that what issues happen from
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plastic
garbage and what measurement against the problems.

The major issue is the serious influence of sea
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creatures
eating microplastic that the size of the
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plastic
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waste
is less than
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5mm
.
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Plastic
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waste
produced in cities or suburbs carries to the ocean by browning wind or flowing rivers. The garbage becomes smaller due to degradation casing by sunlight or repetition of impact;
as a result
, ocean
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creatures
absorb their body to eat it
directly
or feeds, which are microorganisms consuming microplastic.
Consequently
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creatures
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die
or
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get
critical illness for they cannot attribute the rubbish.

There are
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some
measurements, which are a decrease amount of
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plastic
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waste
and protection throwing correct the trash, against this problem. The
first
solution is that
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people
should decline the consumption of
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plastic
products.
For instance
, customers can replace
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use
from a
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plastic
shopping bag or bottled water to a reusable shopping bag and a water bottle.
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to this,
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some
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plastic
items that are difficult to
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use
alternative material should manufacture from bio-degradable
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plastic
. The second solution is that
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civils
should observe the
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rule
of trashing
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plastic
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waste
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because
it can lead to recycle
easily
and
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prevent
to emit the garbage for the ocean.

In conclusion
,
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plastic
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waste
causes
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danger
for ocean
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creatures
, and the countermeasures are that
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people
should
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use
eco-friendly
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goods
and throw trash cans
correctly
.
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IELTS essay More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countrysides, and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
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