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More and more people work from home. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Spreading of pandemic of the Covid 19 boosts people to work from home, and it leads to trouble to managing time and doing research. Arranging schedule became a difficult part for employer working from home. However, they can menage the time freely, and makes deal with other cowokers about hours of works, while they are hard to assure balancing time for works and families. For instance, based from the report of Jakarta Post is almost 45% employer from Mandiri Bank with families consist of Husband/ Wife and 2 children said that they feels unconfortable working from home because most children in this pandemic era also school from home, and their children thinks that parent provides more time playing with them, and they also disturbs their parent meeting with colleague in zoom. In addition, doing research with work from home could be said as almost imposible especially for research that needs to gain the data from the social field requiring to face with people directly. However, it can be replaced with application from computer like zoom meeting, while it cannot touch the data profoundly. For example, the researches assotiation complains that their data only have surface information, it gives impact for research quality and takes place to approximately a half researcher in Indonesia during the outbreaks of covid 19 in 2020. The main problem according to them is imposibble to meet with interviewee directly because some of region is applied lockdown. To sum up, working from home could challenge from some cowokers because they struggles to menage their time and conduct research is became imposible to do from home. Spreading of pandemic of the Covid 19 boosts people to work from home, and it leads to trouble to managing time and doing research. Arranging schedule became a difficult part for employer working from home. However, they can manage the time freely, and makes deal with other coworkers about hours of works, while they are hard to assure balancing time for works and families. For instance, based from the report of Jakarta Post is almost 45% employer from Mandiri Bank with families consist of Husband/ Wife and 2 children said that they feels uncomfortable working from home because most children in this pandemic era also school from home, and their children thinks that parent provides more time playing with them, and they also disturbs their parent meeting with colleague in zoom. In addition, doing research with work from home could be said as almost impossible especially for research that needs to gain the data from the social field requiring to face with people directly. However, it can be replaced with application from computer like zoom meeting, while it cannot touch the data profoundly. For example, the researches association complains that their data only have surface information, it gives impact for research quality and takes place to approximately a half researcher in Indonesia during the outbreaks of covid 19 in 2020. The main problem according to them is impossible to meet with interviewee directly because some of region is applied lockdown. To sum up, working from home could challenge from some coworkers because they struggles to manage their time and conduct research is became impossible to do from home.
Spreading of pandemic of the
Did you mean “COVID-19” or the alternative spelling “Covid-19” (= coronavirus)?
Covid 19
boosts
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people
to
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work
from home, and it leads to trouble to managing
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time
and
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doing
research.

Arranging schedule
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became
a difficult part for
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employer
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working
from home.
However
, they can
‘menage’ is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using “ménage”
menage
the
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time
freely
, and
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makes
deal with other
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cowokers
about hours of works, while they are
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hard
to assure balancing
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time
for works and
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families
.
For instance
, based from the report of Jakarta Post is
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almost
45%
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employer
from
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Mandiri
Bank with
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families
consist of Husband/ Wife and 2
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children
said that they
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feels
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unconfortable
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working
from home
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because
most
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children
in this pandemic era
also
school from home, and their
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children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that
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parent
provides more
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time
playing with them, and they
also
The pronoun ‘they’ must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: “disturb”
disturbs
their
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parent
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meeting
with colleague in zoom.

In addition
,
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doing
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research
with
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work
from home could
be said
as
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almost
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imposible
especially
for
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research
that needs to gain the
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data
from the social field requiring to face with
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people
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directly
.
However
, it can
be replaced
with application from computer like
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zoom
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meeting
, while it cannot touch the
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data
profoundly
.
For example
, the
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researches
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assotiation
complains that their
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data
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
have surface information, it gives impact for
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research
quality and takes place to approximately a half researcher in Indonesia during the outbreaks of
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covid 19
in 2020. The main problem according to them is
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imposibble
to
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meet
with interviewee
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directly
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because
Consider using “some region” or “some of the region”.
some of region
is applied
lockdown.

To sum up,
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working
from home could challenge from
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some
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cowokers
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because
they
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struggles
to
‘menage’ is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using “ménage”
menage
their
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time
and conduct
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research
is
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became
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imposible
to do from home.

Spreading of pandemic of the
Did you mean “COVID-19” or the alternative spelling “Covid-19” (= coronavirus)?
Covid 19
boosts
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home, and it leads to trouble to managing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doing
research.

Arranging schedule
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
became
a difficult part for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
from home.
However
, they can manage the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
freely
, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
deal with other coworkers about hours of works, while they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to assure balancing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for works and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
.
For instance
, based from the report of Jakarta Post is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
almost
45%
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employer
from
Possible spelling mistake found.
Mandiri
Bank with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
consist of Husband/ Wife and 2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
said that they
The pronoun ‘they’ must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: “feel”
feels
uncomfortable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
from home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
in this pandemic era
also
school from home, and their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parent
provides more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
playing with them, and they
also
The pronoun ‘they’ must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: “disturb”
disturbs
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
with colleague in zoom.

In addition
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home could
be said
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
almost
impossible
especially
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
that needs to gain the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
from the social field requiring to face with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
directly
.
However
, it can
be replaced
with application from computer like
Did you mean the communication tool “Zoom” (= proper noun, capitalized)?
zoom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
, while it cannot touch the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
profoundly
.
For example
, the
An apostrophe may be missing.
researches
association complains that their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
have surface information, it gives impact for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
quality and takes place to approximately a half researcher in Indonesia during the outbreaks of
Did you mean “COVID-19” or the alternative spelling “Covid-19” (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
in 2020. The main problem according to them is impossible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
with interviewee
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
directly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
Consider using “some region” or “some of the region”.
some of region
is applied
lockdown.

To sum up,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
from home could challenge from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
coworkers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
The pronoun ‘they’ must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: “struggle”
struggles
to manage their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and conduct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
became
impossible to do from home.

IELTS essay More and more people work from home. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
536 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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