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more and more people are suffring from helth problams coused bg a modren life style which can not be trated with modren madicien, some people think that return to traditional medicien should be encorage, do you agry or sic agree v.2

more and more people are suffring from helth problams coused bg a modren life style which can not be trated with modren madicien, some people think that return to traditional medicien should be encorage, do you agry or sic agree v. 2
All the money in the world cant buy you back good health. the problems of people suffering from health problem causee by a modren life style and they are not satisfy with modren medicien is an issue that has been brought up by many people in the past. i compleatly go with treditional medicen because natural treatment is the best way to help out from new diseases. let us analuze this topic there arevvarious root causes that need to be taken into consideration, whem we talk about the problem of while in the time of modren treatment and using modern medicen, sudden change will occure in human body through that make you very eeak. where as in the case of traditional medicen, there eipp be no side effects like weakness, etc there also dicreased instance of problems such as rashes and skin disease. Again tthere are numerous reasons why we ahould side with, the very populae belife that this topic present. to start with the most notable one stems from the fact that in some unique disease like cancer, fortunatly they are lot of medicen available in traditional way. th neutralizer abstract from the naturae, acts to our body, and it reacts comfortable you will not find any other helth issues while using traditional medicine Taking into account of arguments disussed, we can conclude that to return to traditional medicen should be encorage.
All the money in the world cant
buy
you back
good
health.
the
problems
of
people
suffering from health
problem
causee
by a
modren
life
style and
they are not
satisfy
with
modren
medicien
is an issue that has
been brought
up by
many
people
in the past.
i
compleatly
go with
treditional
medicen
because
natural treatment is the best way to
help
out from new diseases.
let
us
analuze
this
topic


there
arevvarious
root causes that need to
be taken
into consideration,
whem
we talk about the
problem
of while in the time of
modren
treatment and using modern
medicen
, sudden
change
will
occure
in human body through that
make
you
very
eeak
.
where as
in the case of
traditional
medicen
, there
eipp
be no side effects like weakness, etc there
also
dicreased
instance of
problems
such as rashes and skin disease.

Again
tthere
are numerous reasons why we
ahould
side with, the
very
populae
belife
that this topic present.
to
start
with the most notable one stems from the fact that in
some
unique disease like cancer,
fortunatly
they are
lot of
medicen
available in
traditional
way.
th
neutralizer abstract from the
naturae
, acts to our body, and it reacts comfortable you will not find any other
helth
issues while using
traditional
medicine


Taking into account of arguments
disussed
, we can conclude that to return to
traditional
medicen
should be
encorage
.
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IELTS essay more and more people are suffring from helth problams coused bg a modren life style which can not be trated with modren madicien, some people think that return to traditional medicien should be encorage, do you agry or sic agree v. 2

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