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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. kPg8
Nowadays, majority of public prefer private cars for travelling. This essay will suggest that biggest problem caused by this phenomenon is it increase green house gases and then government should influence people towards public transportation as a most viable solution, followed by reasoned conclusion. The foremost problem caused by relying on the private car is rise the level of carbon in environment. The number of people are increasing who use their own vehicle and it leads to rise the vehicle on road. As a result large amount of the green house gases emits in the air and will leads detrimental effects on environment. Delhi is one of the victim of this situation, as per recent reasearch it showed that around 45% of public used their own vehicle and it doubled the level of polution in 2019 than in 2018. However, there are many ways to tackle such a problems, the most practicle solution of this problem is government sponsored awareness campaign to use more and more public transport. An effective advertising campaign should warn of the dangers of the green house gases and air polution and hopefully, raise awareness amongst publict. The Germany is a prime example, the government of Germany offers free public transportation so that more people use that services and it is also reduce public's monthly expences on travel. In conclusion, increasing air polution casued by depends on personal vehicle is one of the foremost challanges we face but one possible solution could be attract people towards public transportation through the government campaign and awareness programs.
Nowadays,
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majority of
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public
prefer private cars for travelling. This essay will suggest that biggest
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problem
caused by this phenomenon is it increase green
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house
gases and then
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government
should influence
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people
towards
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public
transportation as a most viable solution, followed by reasoned conclusion.

The foremost
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problem
caused by relying on the private car is rise the level of carbon in environment. The number of
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people
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are
increasing who
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use
their
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own
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vehicle
and it leads to rise the
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vehicle
on road.
As a result
large amount of the green
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house
gases emits in the air and will leads detrimental effects on environment. Delhi is one of the victim of this situation, as per recent
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reasearch
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showed
that around 45% of
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public
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used
their
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own
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vehicle
and it doubled the level of
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in 2019 than in 2018.

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, there are
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ways to tackle such a
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, the most
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solution of this
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problem
is
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government
sponsored awareness campaign to
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use
more and more
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public
transport. An effective advertising campaign should warn of the
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dangers
of the green
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house
gases and air
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polution
and
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, raise awareness amongst
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publict
. The Germany is a prime example, the
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of Germany offers free
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public
transportation
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that more
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people
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that services and it is
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public's monthly
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expences
on travel.

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, increasing air
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polution
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vehicle
is one of the foremost
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we face
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one possible solution could be
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towards
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transportation through the
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campaign and awareness programs.

IELTS essay More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

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259 words
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