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more and more international companies are investing and locating their business in foreign country. What problems will local communities face with and what can be done ?

more and more international companies are investing and locating their business in foreign country. What problems will local communities face with and what can be done? awlAY
In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about the development of foreign investment by international companies. The main reason for this is that local business cannot compete with large international business and a viable solution is the government should promulgate rules to help improve the local economy. The first major issue id the burden of high taxation makes it difficult for many small businesses to survive. For example, small company makes only 500 dollars per month but they have to pay 300 dollars taxes, and thus, they do not have enough money to pay their employees. In addition, local communities will lose their uniqueness as international companies are the same the world over; therefore, local countries is globalized, which cause local countries loose their culture and traditional. Another natable problem is local businesses cannot compete with large international business. International businesses has large investment sources and advantageous conditions, and consequently, they attract more consumers than local business. It not only decline the local economy but also cause rich become richer, poverty worsens in poor countries. There are two effects solutions to the problem of investing by international companies in foreign contries. One effective measure to deal with international companies is for the government should subsidize local business such as decreasing tax and attracting workers. In addition, local people should find out new technique, then apply it in business to develop their work. Regularly cultivate knowledge, capture new economic trends of the world and apply it to local business's production. Moreover, big companies should work alongside local businesses to support the community, and also corporations should be granted further tax cuts. In conclusion, while more and more international companies are investing and locating their businesses in foreign countries, which can have negative effects on not only the society but also the environment, measures and actions could be taken by both government and citizens to the problems.
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people
are concerned
about the development of foreign investment by
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international
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companies
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The main reason for this is that
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local
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business
cannot compete with large
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international
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business
and a viable solution is the
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government
should promulgate
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rules
to
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help
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improve
the
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local
economy.

The
first
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makes
it difficult for
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many
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small
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businesses
to survive.
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,
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small
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company
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makes
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only
500 dollars per month
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but
they
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have to
pay 300 dollars taxes, and
thus
, they do not have
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enough
money to pay their employees.
In addition
,
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local
communities will lose their uniqueness as
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international
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companies
are the same the world over;
therefore
,
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local
countries
is globalized
, which cause
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local
countries
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loose
their culture and traditional. Another
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problem is
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local
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businesses
cannot compete with large
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international
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business
.
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International
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businesses
has large investment sources and advantageous conditions, and
consequently
, they attract more consumers than
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local
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business
. It not
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only
decline the
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local
economy
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but
also
cause rich become richer, poverty worsens in poor countries.

There are two effects solutions to the problem of investing by
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international
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companies
in foreign
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contries
. One effective measure to deal with
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international
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companies
is for the
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government
should subsidize
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local
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business
such as decreasing tax and attracting workers.
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,
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local
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people
should find out new technique, then apply it in
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business
to develop their work.
Regularly
cultivate knowledge, capture new economic trends of the world and apply it to
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local
business's production.
Moreover
,
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big
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companies
should work alongside
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local
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businesses
to support the community, and
also
corporations should
be granted
further
tax
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cuts
.

In conclusion
, while more and more
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international
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companies
are investing and locating their
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businesses
in foreign countries, which can have
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negative
effects on not
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the society
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the environment, measures and actions could
be taken
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government
and citizens to the problems.
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IELTS essay more and more international companies are investing and locating their business in foreign country. What problems will local communities face with and what can be done?

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