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Modern technology is used extensively in agricultural sector while there are benefits, drawbacks of this trend cannot be overlooked. Discuss.

Modern technology is used extensively in agricultural sector while there are benefits, drawbacks of this trend cannot be overlooked. Discuss. rdAk
Day by days, increasing new technologies are used in every field. Now, in the agricultural sector, the modern technology has a vital role. However, in which has some advantages and disadvantages. I will discuss in both perspective before I give my verdict. To embark upon, in agriculture sector has planty of benefits due to the advance technology. To back in past, people did not have enough advance equipments to used in that farming and produced more foods. Instead now, people have numerious type of equipments such as tractor, harvester and so forth. These equipments are reduce burden of farmer and also soar their production. In addition to, some farmers do not have to knowledge about which crops grow in or suitable for which type of lands. For instance, they have a black clay land but what to do, therefore, due to the technologies they send to their sample of land from agriculture research center and then they give proper knowledge about that land and what crop grow in there. Further more, even on mobile single application to know about land and more other agriculture related information avaliable for 24*7. On the other hand, people nowadays, more and more unseasonal foods produce by increasing use of the chamical. This is unhealthy for our health and in that food taste is not like a natural. For example, summer season food mangoes are todays, available in market whole the year. Moreover, some individuals do not effort to the advance machines like a tractor and harvestor because it is very expensive. To conclude, I think modern technology has more advantages outweigh to disadvantages in agriculture sector because of people know about their lands features as well as their sustainable production what is suitable and also easy to use it.
Day by days, increasing new
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used
in every field.
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Now
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technology
has a vital role.
However
, in which has
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some
advantages and disadvantages. I will discuss in both perspective
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before
I give my verdict.

To embark upon, in
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agriculture
sector has
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planty
of benefits due to the advance
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technology
. To back
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in past
,
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people
did not have
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enough
advance equipments to
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used
in that farming and produced more
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foods
.
Instead
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now
,
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people
have
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numerious
type of equipments such as tractor, harvester and
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so
forth. These equipments are
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reduce
burden of farmer and
also
soar their production.
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to,
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some
farmers do not
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have to
knowledge about which crops grow in or suitable for which type of
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lands
.
For instance
, they have a black clay
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land
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but
what to do,
therefore
, due to the
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technologies
they
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send
to their sample of
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land
from
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agriculture
research
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center and
then they give proper knowledge about that
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land
and what crop grow in there.
Further
more, even on mobile single application to know about
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land
and more other
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agriculture
related information
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avaliable
for
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24*7.


On the other hand
,
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people
nowadays, more and more
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unseasonal
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foods
produce by increasing
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use
of the
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chamical
. This is unhealthy for our health and in that
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food
taste is not like a natural.
For example
, summer season
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food
mangoes are
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todays
, available in market whole the year.
Moreover
,
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some
individuals do not effort to the advance machines like a tractor and
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harvestor
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because
it is
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very
expensive.

To conclude
, I
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think
modern
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technology
has more advantages outweigh to disadvantages in
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agriculture
sector
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because
of
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people
know about their
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lands
features
as well
as their sustainable production what is suitable and
also
easy to
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use
it.
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IELTS essay Modern technology is used extensively in agricultural sector while there are benefits, drawbacks of this trend cannot be overlooked. Discuss.

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