Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extend is this a positive or a negative development? v.1
Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. v. 1
TECHNOLOGY HAS ROSE HUMAN LIFE-EXPECTANCY TO SOME EXTENT. HENCE, PEOPLE LIVE MUCH LONGER THAN USUAL AND THAT IS EHY CERTAIN FOLKS ARGUE TO RISE THE RETIREMENT AGE FROM WORK. THIS ESSAY WILL COMPLETELY CONCUR WITH THE STATEMENT DUE TO NUMEROUS ADVATAGES FO DOING SO. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS HOW THE INDIVIDUAL WOULD BE BENEFITED AND SECONDLY, HOW THIS WOULD CONTRIBUTE TO PEAK THE NATION'S ECONOMY.
FROM AN INDIVIDUAL POINT OF VIEW, INCREASED PENSION RECEIVING AGE MAKE OLDER FOLKS INDEPENDENT. AS A RESULT, THEY DO NOT HAVE TO RELY ON THEIR OFFSPRING OR RELATIVES. THIS WOULD DELINE THE OLD-AGE HOME REQUIREMENT AROUN THE NATION. FOR INSTANCE, ACCORDING TO THE CANADIAN GOVERNMENT, 80% OF THEIR CIVILIAN OVER THE AGE OF 60 LIVING HAPPYLY EVER AS THEY HAVE ENOUGH FINANCIAL SUPPORT FOR THEMSELVES DUE TO RAISED RETIREMENT AGE.
FROM THE GOVERNMENT POINT OF VIEW, THE CHANGE IN RETIREMENT AGE WOULD MAKE COUNTRY'S ECONOMY MUCH STRONGER THAN EVER, AS THERE WOULD BE MORE WORKFORCE IN EACH FIELD. THIS WOULD RISE THE NUMBER OF TAX PAYER MEMBERS, CONSEQUENTLY, ECONOMY WOULD BE INCREASED. FOR EXAMPLE, THE USA ECONOMY CONSIDERED AS WEALTHY AND STRONGEST IN COMPARE TO OTHER DEVELOPED TERRITORIES, BECAUSE OF THE MORE RETIRE AGE. HOWEVER, AT SOME POINT, THERE WOULD BE NO SPOT FOR THE FRESHERS TO TO AND OBTAIN A SUFFICIENT TRAING IN THE FIELD AS THERE WILL BE MORE SENIORS AVAILABLE TO FILL THE SPOT.
IN CONCLUSION, INCREASED RETIREMENT AGE INDEED OFFER SEVERAL PROS THAN CONS FOR THE PERSON AND AUTHORITY AS WELL. BUT, TO IMPIMENT THIS CHANGE, THE REGIME SHOULD HAVE SUPPORT FROM PUBLIC AND TO GET THAT, THEY HAVE TO PROOVE THE BENEFITS TO THE CIVILIN. NEVERTHELESS, ONCE THEY GET THE SUPPORT, THERE WOULD BE NO STOP ON THE ECONOMY SIDE.
TECHNOLOGY HAS ROSE HUMAN LIFE-EXPECTANCY TO
SOME
EXTENT.
HENCE
,
PEOPLE
LIVE
MUCH LONGER THAN USUAL AND
THAT IS
EHY
CERTAIN FOLKS ARGUE TO RISE THE
RETIREMENT
AGE
FROM WORK. THIS ESSAY WILL COMPLETELY CONCUR WITH THE STATEMENT DUE TO NUMEROUS
ADVATAGES
FO DOING
SO
.
FIRSTLY
, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS HOW THE INDIVIDUAL WOULD
BE BENEFITED
AND
SECONDLY
, HOW THIS WOULD CONTRIBUTE TO PEAK THE NATION'S ECONOMY.
FROM AN INDIVIDUAL POINT OF VIEW, INCREASED PENSION RECEIVING
AGE
MAKE
OLDER FOLKS INDEPENDENT.
AS A RESULT
, THEY DO NOT
HAVE TO
RELY ON THEIR OFFSPRING OR RELATIVES. THIS WOULD
DELINE
THE
OLD
-AGE HOME REQUIREMENT
AROUN
THE NATION.
FOR INSTANCE
, ACCORDING TO THE CANADIAN
GOVERNMENT
, 80% OF THEIR CIVILIAN OVER THE
AGE
OF 60 LIVING
HAPPYLY
EVER AS THEY HAVE
ENOUGH
FINANCIAL SUPPORT FOR THEMSELVES DUE TO RAISED
RETIREMENT
AGE.
FROM THE
GOVERNMENT
POINT OF VIEW, THE
CHANGE
IN
RETIREMENT
AGE
WOULD
MAKE
COUNTRY'S
ECONOMY
MUCH STRONGER THAN EVER, AS THERE WOULD BE MORE WORKFORCE IN EACH FIELD. THIS WOULD RISE THE NUMBER OF TAX PAYER MEMBERS,
CONSEQUENTLY
,
ECONOMY
WOULD
BE INCREASED
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, THE USA
ECONOMY
CONSIDERED AS WEALTHY AND STRONGEST IN COMPARE TO OTHER DEVELOPED TERRITORIES,
BECAUSE
OF THE MORE RETIRE
AGE
.
HOWEVER
, AT
SOME
POINT, THERE WOULD BE NO SPOT FOR THE FRESHERS
TO TO
AND OBTAIN A SUFFICIENT
TRAING
IN THE FIELD AS THERE WILL BE MORE SENIORS AVAILABLE TO FILL THE SPOT.
IN CONCLUSION
, INCREASED
RETIREMENT
AGE
INDEED
OFFER SEVERAL PROS THAN CONS FOR THE PERSON AND AUTHORITY
AS WELL
.
BUT
, TO
IMPIMENT
THIS
CHANGE
, THE REGIME SHOULD HAVE SUPPORT FROM PUBLIC AND TO
GET
THAT, THEY
HAVE TO
PROOVE
THE BENEFITS TO THE
CIVILIN
.
NEVERTHELESS
, ONCE THEY
GET
THE SUPPORT, THERE WOULD BE NO
STOP
ON THE
ECONOMY
SIDE.
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