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Modern technology has greatly influenced people's ways of entertainment, making people less creative. Do you agree or disagree?

Modern technology has greatly influenced people's ways of entertainment, making people less creative. weDNd

However, in any case, that advancement is facilitating people to interact via a plethora of communication network, accessing multiple sources of information, thus helping people develop creation in entertainment or other aspect. For example, in the past, movie, music or games are not a trend and less people know about that, so doing something new is a big problem with anybody. But now, when a film releases, although it is not by a famous creator, it still can be a trend, due to that, people are allowed to do their own interest and creative freedom. Therefore, nowadays, a huge product is debuted in new a new way, much more creative and sometimes it can be weird, basically, creating in a own way is a trend.

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