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Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. 3rqJ
Life in today's world have become hectic. Workforce environment compared to past have changed, with involvement of woman's. This leads parents to work and due to which they are not able to give major attention to their children. Firstly, Today's style of living is much different from past. Basic needs of family have either changed or increased. Owing to which single member of family is not able to fulfill all the needs. Some products or activities which were regarded as luxury is now become a necessity. Apart from this, cost of living in society have increased as well.
Life in
today
's world have become hectic. Workforce environment compared to past have
changed
, with involvement of woman's. This leads parents to work and due to which they are not able to give major attention to their children.
Firstly
,
Today
's style of living is much
different
from past. Basic needs of family have either
changed
or increased. Owing to which single member of family is not able to fulfill all the needs.
Some
products or activities which
were regarded
as luxury is
now
become a necessity. Apart from this, cost of living in society have increased
as well
.
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IELTS essay Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past.

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