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DMS is Danang Model United Nations Society directly under Le Quy Don High School for the Gifted. Here, the participants have an ability to act as the representatives of any nation to discuss and contemplate on the world issues / arduousnesses from that country's stance. On a regular basis, MUN organizations in Vietnam aimed at high school students and the undergraduate. What is more, it doesn’t require any partaker to study politics or international relations. As far as I know, the knowledge associating with MUN spans multitudinous disciplines in life such as: security, economy, technology, health, education. . . depending on the committee selected by MUNers. For example, the WTO Council entails the comprehension of the international economics, the NATO Council demands the expertise of security and defense, the OPEC Council needs the understanding of the oil markets. . . Indeed, it’s an immensely good opportunity for young people to have an ability to cultivate advanced attainments and traverse global quandaries from multifarious angles. Simultaneously, this is also a pedagogic playground where partakers can acquire copious distinct skills. To take part in MUN, MUNers necessitate coordinating numerous skills at the same time such as communication, debate, criticism, negotiation, research skills, teamwork, leadership, . . . , esspecially all used in English. For young people pursuing diplomacy and international relations, MUN is a potential prospect for them to meet new people and make new friends with the related passions and pastimes. MUN also gives us the fortunes to become diplomatists in formal attire, behave and speak to each other in diplomatic styles as well as express our verdicts on the concerns, thereby forming more detached and multidimensional outlooks on the world. On the other hand, the contestants of MUN are called delegates who are assigned to random committees and nations or being on behalf of other organizations and political figures. Moreover, apiece has to contribute their ideas, clarifications, and solutions to the global issues during the conference. Additionally, per delegate will have a chance to manifest their standpoints and directions on the problems of the countries or organizations they deputize upon out-and-out consideration. If I’m not under a misunderstanding, young individuals when applying for this position will need to prepare about 130, 000 dong and also they have to pass 2 rounds: the application one and the interview one. To accomplish a specific goal, the delegates have to genuinely apprehend the disparate impingements of the predicaments on their assigned nations as well as have a great command of the momentary states of those countries in order to be capable of delivering persuasive speeches and notions. This demands each delegate to have profoundly pragmatic minds and the faculties to put themselves in their countries' shoes to penetrate and share preoccupations. Furthermore, aside from the delegates, MUN also has Observer tickets, and we have to prepare about 100, 000 dong when applying for this position. Last but not least, a meeting can last from 2 to 3 days and it is classified into many various sessions. At the end of the meeting, the best-performed delegates in each committee or delegation with prominent accomplishments will be recognized with an award or certificate by the organization. And that’s also the end of the recording today. Thank you so much for spending time on this, see you in next recording. Bye! ! !
DMS is
Danang
Model United
Nations
Society
directly
under Le
Quy
Don High School for the Gifted. Here, the participants have an ability to act as the representatives of any
nation
to discuss and contemplate on the world issues /
arduousnesses
from that country's stance. On a regular basis, MUN
organizations
in Vietnam aimed at high school students and the undergraduate.
What is more
, it doesn’t require any partaker to study politics or international relations. As far as I know, the knowledge associating with MUN spans multitudinous disciplines in life such as: security, economy, technology, health, education.
.
.
depending
on the committee selected by
MUNers
.
For example
, the WTO Council entails the comprehension of the international economics, the NATO Council demands the expertise of security and defense, the OPEC Council needs the understanding of the oil markets.
.
.
Indeed
, it’s an
immensely
good
opportunity for young
people
to have an ability to cultivate advanced attainments and traverse global quandaries from multifarious angles.
Simultaneously
, this is
also
a pedagogic playground where partakers can acquire copious distinct
skills
. To
take part
in MUN,
MUNers
necessitate coordinating numerous
skills
at the same time such as communication, debate, criticism, negotiation, research
skills
, teamwork, leadership
, .
.
.
,
esspecially
all
used
in English. For young
people
pursuing diplomacy and international relations, MUN is a potential prospect for them to
meet
new
people
and
make
new friends with the related passions and pastimes. MUN
also
gives us the fortunes to become diplomatists in formal attire, behave and speak to each other in diplomatic styles
as well
as express our verdicts on the concerns, thereby forming more detached and multidimensional outlooks on the world.
On the other hand
, the contestants of MUN
are called
delegates
who
are assigned
to random committees and
nations
or being on behalf of other
organizations
and political figures.
Moreover
, apiece
has to
contribute their
ideas
, clarifications, and solutions to the global issues during the conference.
Additionally
, per
delegate
will have a chance to manifest their standpoints and directions on the problems of the countries or
organizations
they deputize upon out-and-out consideration. If I’m not under a misunderstanding, young individuals when applying for this position will need to prepare about 130, 000 dong and
also
they
have to
pass 2 rounds: the application one and the interview one. To accomplish a specific goal, the
delegates
have to
genuinely
apprehend the disparate
impingements
of the predicaments on their assigned
nations
as well
as have a great command of the momentary states of those countries in order to be capable of delivering persuasive speeches and notions. This demands each
delegate
to have
profoundly
pragmatic minds and the faculties to put themselves in their countries' shoes to penetrate and share preoccupations.
Furthermore
, aside from the
delegates
, MUN
also
has Observer tickets, and we
have to
prepare about 100, 000 dong when applying for this position. Last
but
not least, a meeting can last from 2 to 3 days and it
is classified
into
many
various sessions. At the
end
of the meeting, the best-performed
delegates
in each committee or delegation with prominent accomplishments will
be recognized
with an award or certificate by the
organization
. And that’s
also
the
end
of the recording
today
. Thank you
so
much for spending time on this,
see
you in
next
recording. Bye! ! !
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IELTS essay model of the Unided nations

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1 paragraphs
557 words
5.5
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