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mind of child and there education

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According to the present world It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school, It will make them independent for a period of time. First of all, this will prepare the students for higher education. In the school student are no fully matured. Even some remain childish in thinking and behaviour and Moreover, it will make one to understand the professional life. This will provide important experience to a student to mange theirs studies with work and it will also gives a chance to improve communication as we know communication skill plays an important role now a days If i have an opportunity to travel across countries i would have a chance to know more about learning new foreign language and there culture and how they live there lifes perspective ways In other side i would say that young people minds are Naive and they are easly manipulate and there are chances to go in wrong way which is bad for there career

According to the present world It is quite common these days for young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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many
 countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school, It will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them independent for a period of time.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, this will prepare the students for higher education. In the school student are no fully
 matured. Even This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 remain childish in thinking and Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
 and Moreover
, it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 one to understand the professional life. This will provide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 experience to a student to mange theirs studies with work and it will also
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "give"give
gives
 a chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 communication as we know communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 plays an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role Did you mean "nowadays"?nowadays
now a days


If Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have an opportunity to travel across countries Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would have a chance to know more about learning new foreign language and there culture and how they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 there Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "lives", the plural form of the noun 'life'?liveslifelieslineslightslikes
lifes
 perspective ways

In other side Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would say that young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 minds are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Naive, and
Naive and
 they are Possible spelling mistake found.earlyeasilyeasymeaslyea slyEasley
easly
 manipulate and there are chances to go in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 way which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 for there Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphcareer.career!career?career:career,career;
career