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English is the most commonly used language worldwide. Enormous amount of individuals are prefering migerating to countries like Australia, Britain, America for further studies, the native language of these countries is english. This essay will provide a rationale on why pupils opt to study in english language and also why english is dominant language internationally. There are plenty of reasons for studing in english. Firstly, people getting well-connected in this era of globalisation and english is considered to be a universal language and henceforth people study in english. Secondly, international business and trade are mostly carried out in english language, people ought to remain up-to-date about the language. Also a degree in english language would helpful to get a job anywhere in the world, especially in a country whose language is english. For instance, a degree in Hindi language will limit the job opportunities binded to India. To remove this barrier, people pursuade a degree in english. There is no doubt that english an important language, as we can see that it is being used by many countries, plus it is also a second language in few of them. Main reason behind this is that in ancient times, British people travelled alot in sea and ruled many countries, they where responsible for introducing english language to the different areas of the world. In order to connect with the world and organise trade with each other, comman language is crucial. To sum up the discussion, Global language bestow us with convience factor and therefore gigantic migeration is seen in english-speaking countries for studing at schools, colleges or universities.
English is the most
commonly
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used
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language
worldwide. Enormous amount of individuals are
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prefering
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migerating
to
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countries
like Australia, Britain, America for
further
studies, the native
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language
of these
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countries
is
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english
. This essay will provide a rationale on why pupils opt to study in
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english
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language
and
also
why
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english
is dominant
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language
internationally
.

There are
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plenty
of reasons for
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studing
in
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english
.
Firstly
,
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people
getting well-connected in this era of
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globalisation
and
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english
is considered
to be a universal
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language
and henceforth
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people
study in
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english
.
Secondly
, international business and trade are
mostly
carried out in
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english
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language
,
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people
ought to remain up-to-date about the
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language
.
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Also
a degree in
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english
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language
would helpful to
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get
a job anywhere in the world,
especially
in a
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country
whose
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is
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english
.
For instance
, a degree in Hindi
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language
will limit the job opportunities
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binded
to India. To remove this barrier,
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people
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pursuade
a degree in
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english
.

There is no doubt that
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english
an
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important
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, as we can
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see
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used
by
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many
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countries
, plus it is
also
a second
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language
in few of them. Main reason behind this is that in ancient times, British
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people
travelled
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alot
in sea and ruled
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many
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countries
, they
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where
responsible for introducing
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english
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language
to the
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different
areas of the world. In order to connect with the world and
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organise
trade with each other,
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comman
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language
is crucial.

To sum up the discussion, Global
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language
bestow us with
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convience
factor and
therefore
gigantic
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migeration
is
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seen
in
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english-speaking
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countries
for
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studing
at schools, colleges or universities.
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IELTS essay Millions of people every year move to

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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