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Secondly, war and persecution are different reasons for migration in the world. In Syria people are heading to europian contries to find more safety places. Ongoing civil war are pushing many of Syrians to address forigen countries to supply them with shelters. it is indicated by UN Refugee Agency UNHCR, by December 2017 the number of asylum seekers has reached to 5, 440, 749 from Syria. Converserly, Afghans displaced because of racial, poltical discrimination. In Afghanistan when Taliban took control, the threats for people `s life increased. according to conducted survey by BBC indicated that the majority of Afghans migrants have faced religion persecution.
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by UN Refugee Agency UNHCR, by December 2017 the number of asylum seekers has reached to 5, 440, 749 from Syria.
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of racial,
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`s life increased.
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IELTS essay migration causes in differebt countries

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
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