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Men and women employed full time job should share the responcibility of household chores.

Men and women employed full time job should share the responcibility of household chores. 1e9n

The duties of male and female in household must be equally contribute to the domestic work of a house. In this essay I share both views and then I will give my personal experience. Nowadays, married couples are doing jobs as a full time worker in different companies to manage their household expenses I am somewhat disagree with this statement that, if both are working in a family. For instance, they will not give proper time to their children and individually as well. Meanwhile, they will not perform their regular domestic work at home. If both are working they also have advantage to hire someone to maintain routine work for at home. However, in my family we are three member and all of them are working in full time job. My personal experience is that we are giving proper time to all members and we also distribute routine work, take proper care of each member in family. Instead of hiring any servant or a caretaker we planned and managed our routine work individually whether we are working in a full time or ina part time job. In conclusion, the responsibilities must be equally handled by both men and women in household and it will not depend on our working conditions as well.

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must
 be equally
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contribute
 to the domestic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 of a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. In this essay I share both views and then I will give my personal experience.

Nowadays, married couples are doing jobs as a full You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 worker in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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companies
 to manage their household expenses I am somewhat Consider using a past participle here: "disagreed".disagreed
disagree
 with this statement that, if both are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 in a family. For instance
, they will not give proper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 to their children and individually
as well
. Meanwhile, they will not perform their regular domestic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 at home. If both are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 they also
 have advantage to hire someone to maintain routine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 for at home.

However
, in my family we are three member and all of them are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 in full You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 job. My personal experience is that we are giving proper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 to all Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).members, and
members and
 we also
 distribute routine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
, take proper care of each member in family. Instead
 of hiring any servant or a caretaker we planned and managed our routine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
individually
 whether we are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 in a full You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 or ina part You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 job.

In conclusion
, the responsibilities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be equally
 handled by both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 and women in household and it will not depend on our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 conditions as well
. 