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The given picture show the life cycle of honey bee.

The given picture show the life cycle of honey bee. aOYP
To begin with, the life cycle of honey bee starts with laying eggs. Firstly, the female bee lays two eggs every three days. Then, the eggs hatch after 9 to 10 days and unmature insect comes of it and the insect called nymph. After that, the nymph starts grow in size and shed his skin this stage known as moulting. Nymph 3 times as it grows. First, 5 days later from hatching eggs next, 7 days later and last 9 days later. Probing further, total 31 days spend for growing. After that, nymph grows and converts into young adult. Lastly, young adult honey bee takes more 4 days for becoming mature. The mature honey bee starts this process again from laying eggs.
To
begin
with, the life cycle of honey bee
starts
with laying eggs.
Firstly
, the female bee lays two eggs every three days. Then, the eggs hatch after 9 to 10 days and
unmature
insect
comes
of it and the insect called nymph. After that, the nymph
starts
grow in size and shed his skin this stage known as
moulting
. Nymph 3 times as it grows.
First
, 5 days later from hatching eggs
next
, 7 days later and last 9 days later. Probing
further
, total 31 days spend for growing. After that, nymph grows and converts into young adult.
Lastly
, young adult honey bee takes more 4 days for becoming mature. The mature honey bee
starts
this process again from laying eggs.
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IELTS essay The given picture show the life cycle of honey bee.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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