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Men and women both can do same jobs to what extent do you agree

Men and women both can do same jobs to what extent do you agree PEalB

Without any qualms, it is reported by some that whether males and females are able to perform equivalent jobs or not. I partially accord myself with above assertion. Are there certain jobs in which role of men is much superior than women? Certainly there are, it is true fact that some professions have need not only of more strengthen but also extra muscles especially the army or militery. Owing to this, women are considered less powerfull rather than men. Besides, since

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IELTS essay Men and women both can do same jobs to what extent do you agree

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American English

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