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Men and women both can do same jobs to what extent do you agree

Men and women both can do same jobs to what extent do you agree PEalB
Without any qualms, it is reported by some that whether males and females are able to perform equivalent jobs or not. I partially accord myself with above assertion. Are there certain jobs in which role of men is much superior than women? Certainly there are, it is true fact that some professions have need not only of more strengthen but also extra muscles especially the army or militery. Owing to this, women are considered less powerfull rather than men. Besides, since
Without any qualms, it
is reported
by
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some
that whether males and females are able to perform equivalent jobs or not. I
partially
accord myself with above assertion.

Are there certain jobs in which role of
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men
is much
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superior than
women?
Certainly
there are, it is true fact that
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some
professions have need not
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only
of more strengthen
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but
also
extra muscles
especially
the army or
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militery
. Owing to this, women
are considered
less
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powerfull
rather
than
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IELTS essay Men and women both can do same jobs to what extent do you agree

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  American English
2 paragraphs
80 words
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