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Men and women are able to do every job well. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Men and women are able to do every job well. RVgBG
Undoubtedly, as gender gap has disappeared, it is reported by some individuals at recent period, both male and females are able to attempt any work. I accord myself to a great extent with this assertion. Although, on the one hand, a section of society assert, there are some professions in which either the more strengthen or extra efforts are responsible namely loading the goods as well in army. Owing to this, women are ever considered less powerfull as compared to men. As a consequent, only men are capable to manage these distinct type of work. Besides, in case of nurturing the juveniles, women has believed more superior than men because in these kind of work there is neither need to provide any training nor need of guidance for women. They have adequate knowledge naturally. Thus people consider performing work is based in the gender. However, inspite of above-mentioned fact, are there several explanation which would prove, both can accomplish any task? Certainly there are, first tenable pro, as technology has been flourishing not only the male candidates but also women are contributing there great efforts at every nook and corner. Due to it, all fields whether these are associated with banking, engineering, industries or medical stream both genders are involved: Moreover, in the white collar jobs in which mental abilities are more essential than physical work both have engaged. Last but not the least, although, in ancient time women were not much educated, now acquisition of University education has become prevalent in grils and boys. Hence, all type work can be done through both. In conclusion, after elucidating the above-mentioned information it has proved, male and females both can perform every work at the contemporary world and no any one is more superior both are equal.
Undoubtedly
, as gender gap has disappeared, it
is reported
by
some
individuals at recent period, both male and females are able to attempt any
work
. I accord myself to a great extent with this assertion.

Although, on the one hand, a section of society assert, there are
some
professions in which either the more strengthen or extra efforts are responsible
namely
loading the
goods
as well
in army. Owing to this,
women
are ever considered less
powerfull
as compared to
men
. As a consequent,
only
men
are capable to manage these distinct type of
work
.
Besides
, in case of nurturing the juveniles,
women
has believed
more superior than
men
because
in
these kind
of
work
there is neither need to provide any training nor need of guidance for
women
. They have adequate knowledge
naturally
.
Thus
people
consider performing
work
is based
in the gender.

However
,
inspite
of above-mentioned fact, are there
several explanation
which would prove, both can accomplish any task?
Certainly
there are,
first
tenable pro, as technology has been flourishing not
only
the male candidates
but
also
women
are contributing there great efforts at every nook and corner. Due to it, all fields whether these
are associated
with banking, engineering, industries or medical stream both genders
are involved
:
Moreover
, in the white collar jobs in which mental abilities are more essential than physical
work
both have engaged. Last
but
not the least, although, in ancient time
women
were not much educated,
now
acquisition of University education has become prevalent in
grils
and boys.
Hence
, all type
work
can
be done
through both.

In conclusion
, after elucidating the above-mentioned information it has proved, male and females both can perform every
work
at the contemporary world and
no
any one
is more superior both are equal.
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IELTS essay Men and women are able to do every job well.

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