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Medical technology is responsible for human s life expectancy Is it a curse or a blessing to the society as a whole

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Nowadays our life is fully dependent on the medical technology and as you can see that medical technology development is growing very fast phase. Everyday new technology coming up and giving the solution against each disease. I will discuss my point of view on medical technology. To begin with benefits of medical technology to human life, there are enormous advantages of medical technology for curing any type of disease. Due to advanced medical technology people are not going for natural cure of any disease they rely on curing with technology. For instance, Cancer is dangerous and non-curable disease. With this advanced medical technology cancer can be 100% curable within 6 months of time. On the contrary part, there is a numerous curse of medical technology as most of the people rely on this technology and they avoid disease in natural way due to its process is slow. In past decade most of the people follow natural process for curing of any diseases which good for their body as it is not distort to body. In conclusion, medical technology is responsible for human life expectancy as it cures any level of disease so people are fully rely on that and they avoid natural process in curing of disease due to its longer time even it is helpful to some extent.
Nowadays our life is
fully
dependent on the
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medical
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technology
and as you can
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see
that medical

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technology
development is growing
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very
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fast
phase. Everyday new
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technology
coming up and giving
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the


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solution
against each
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disease
. I will discuss my point of view on
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medical
technology.

To
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begin
with benefits of
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medical
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to human life, there are enormous advantages of medical

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technology
for curing any type of
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disease
. Due to advanced
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medical
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technology
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people
are not going
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for


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natural
cure of any
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disease
they rely on curing with
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technology
.
For instance
, Cancer is
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dangerous
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and


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non-curable
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disease
. With this advanced
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medical
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technology
cancer can be 100% curable within 6

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months
of time.

On the contrary
part, there is a numerous curse of
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medical
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technology
as most of the
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people
rely on this

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technology
and they avoid
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disease
in natural way due to its process is slow. In past decade most of
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the


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people
follow natural process for curing of any
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diseases
which
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good
for their body as it is not
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distort
to

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body
.

In conclusion
,
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medical
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technology
is responsible for human life expectancy as it cures any level of

disease
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so
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people
are
fully
rely on
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that and
they avoid natural process in curing of
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disease
due to its

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longer
time even it is helpful to
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some
extent.
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IELTS essay Medical technology is responsible for human s life expectancy Is it a curse or a blessing to the society as a whole

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219 words
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