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The Media is an extremely popular in our life. It displays numerous of celebrities who they are popular people in all kinds of sectors. However, I think that they are effect of teenagers or young man and women. We will talk about points view of impact celebrities on community. However, I would like the merit of celebrities is give a good example and some they are using their platform for awareness people about medical issues. For instance, Angelina Jolie is actress on Hollywood and UN Woman Goodwill Ambassador. Although, she is famous, she still help refugees in Syria or Africa. On the contrary, the teenagers are imitating their celebrities foe example, on day Justin paper who actress and has numerous of fans, but he was drunk and arrested. this behavior let teengers will do it like him. In conclusion, I believe that they are influence the generation. my opinion should be parents monitor their children from effect of medial and select a good celebrities to them.

The Media You should probably use: "are".are
is
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 popular in our life. It displays numerous of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonefigureluminarypersonageherostar
celebrities
 who they are popular This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in all kinds of sectors. However
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that they are effect of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 or young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 and women. We will talk about points view of impact You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonefigureluminarypersonageherostar
celebrities
 on community.

However
, I would like the merit of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonefigureluminarypersonageherostar
celebrities
 is give a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 example and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 they are using their platform for awareness This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 about medical issues. For instance
, Angelina Jolie is actress on Hollywood and UN Woman Goodwill Ambassador. Although, she is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
, she still
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "helps", "helped".helpshelped
help
 refugees in Syria or Africa.

On the contrary
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 are imitating their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonefigureluminarypersonageherostar
celebrities
 foe example, on day Justin paper A noun should not follow 'who'. Try changing to a verb or maybe to "who is a actress".who is a actress
who actress
 and has numerous of fans, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he was drunk
 and arrested. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
 behavior This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
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teengers
 will do it like him.

In conclusion
, I believe that they are influence the generation. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 opinion should be parents monitor their children from effect of medial and select a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "celebrity"?celebrity
celebrities
 to them. 