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Few people believe, in current society, people are judged by their economic status and social rank to the

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Few people believe, in current society, people are judged by their economic status and social rank to the contrary, in olden days people are determined by their values, behaviour and honesty. In my opinion, determining an individual has changed in certain aspects which is creating a wrong assumption on an individual. Firstly, considering social rank economic status creates false statements on an individual and these are alleged ranks. For instance, in social media a number of people maintain a colorful life which will change by observing reality. Due to the fact that people are determined by social rank, many individuals are creating a fake life on social media and trying to buy a lot of things which they cannot afford. It is noticeable, old-fashioned ways for determining a person helps every individual to understand and determine a person easily and accurately. For example, while interviewing an individual major requirements should be honour, trust, honesty. If we consider social rank in these situations, the interviewee is making a big mistake and might affect his business. We can also consider examples of making friends, while making a friend considering social ranks and things that might make you have a dishonest friend which is not helpful in a lot of ways. In conclusion, determining an individual is a hard job, determining in an old-fashioned way at least helps us in having an honest and trustworthy person in life. Every individual needs to stop judging by social rank and economic status as it is making people create a fake life, making their life miserable.
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to the contrary, in olden days
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people
are determined
by their values,
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behaviour
and honesty. In my opinion, determining an
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has
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changed
in certain aspects which is creating a
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wrong
assumption on an individual.

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, considering
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social
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economic status creates false statements on an
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individual
and these
are alleged
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ranks
.
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, in
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social
media a number of
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people
maintain a colorful
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life
which will
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change
by observing reality. Due to the fact that
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people
are determined
by
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social
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rank
,
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individuals
are creating a fake
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on
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media and trying to
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buy
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a lot of
things which they cannot afford.

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-fashioned ways for determining a person
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helps
every
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individual
to understand and determine a person
easily
and
accurately
.
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, while interviewing an
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individual
major
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requirements
should be
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honour
, trust, honesty. If we consider
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social
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rank
in these situations, the interviewee is making a
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big
mistake and might affect his business. We can
also
consider examples of making friends, while making a friend considering
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social
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ranks
and things that might
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make
you have a dishonest friend which is not helpful in
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a lot of
ways.

In conclusion
, determining an
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individual
is a
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hard
job, determining in an
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old
-fashioned way at least
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helps
us in having an honest and trustworthy person in
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life
. Every
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individual
needs to
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stop
judging by
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social
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rank
and economic status as it is making
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people
create a fake
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life
, making their
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life
miserable.
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IELTS essay Few people believe, in current society, people are judged by their economic status and social rank to the

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  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6.0
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